【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 asingly beautiful and warm and advance conclusion, we should continue to give seats to others and give others a thank you and a smile when they do the same to the saying : ―Giving others roses and the scent will remain.‖ Let’s make our slightest action as a gift to others and contribute to a happier world : Chinese people always have the tradition of helping others。regardless of a friend or a , in recent years, people find that when they try to help others, some changes are taking of the most mon examples is that, a passerby who sent an injured senior people to hospital would be very likely to be recognized as the kind of events is being rerun again and trapped in the dilemma of tradition and trouble, what would be your choice?有一句話推薦你思考一下：Virtue is its own 。The rose39。s in others’ hand, the flavor in about helping others but getting punished are often seen these days with negative ??，這是很常見的開頭套路，針對它的翻譯也基本很難耍出什么新鮮花樣，所以干脆換中文表達：最近我們常常看到這樣的新聞??。這個思路挺好的，但是with negative effects 很奇怪，去掉就可以了。修改1：News about helping others but getting punished are often seen these ？不確切，應該是付出了代價，沒有好下場之類的。修改2：Good deeds can cost you a large fortune – it is nothing new in today’s , debate has arisen: whether or not we should keep on helping others? People think ，中式英語是硬傷啊，你的詞匯量神馬絕對不是問題，但是用的是否準確就難說了。解決這個問題的方法很簡單啊，積累，不要局限于導致，結(jié)果，因此這些邏輯連接詞，任何可以精簡你的文章的動詞和名詞都可以啊。inevitably是個很高大上的單詞，但是“難免的”用在這里有點過了。類似于：人們觀點各不相同，人們議論紛紛這種很明顯是湊字數(shù)，完全可以刪除的話就扔掉吧，把你的精力用在更實際的演繹推理上。whether or not后面引導了賓語從句，陳述語序后面你加了問號？口語中可以，但是寫作就顯得不正式了。修改：As a result, people often find themselves between a rock and a hard place whenever they run across a person in need of the one hand, they are in fear of being wrongly identified。on the other hand, they are morally obliged to lend a ，但是如果你有把握用不同的短語和角度把事情表達一遍也可以，如果沒有把握干脆就避開直奔主題。As far as I am concerned, I would choose to keep on helping others and deepen the Chinese moral value of helping others in my mind for reasons ？有點怪怪的??修改：As far as I am concerned, despite all the possible consequences, I would still insist on helping others, as ―virtue is its own reward‖.好了，接下來就有點難在你的文章上動刀了，因為我們倆的出發(fā)點不一樣。但是，我可以把我的邏輯給你看看。我的總觀點很簡單，因為美德本身就是一種獎勵（A），所以我愿意繼續(xù)幫助別人（B）。那么我接下來必須要證明為什么美德本身就是一種獎勵，（好難??！T^T）。為什么？會給自己有價值的感覺。為什么？因為能散播正能量，避免自己在需要幫助的時候沒人幫助自己；善有惡報的確是很糟糕的事情，但是因為少數(shù)人的錯誤而放棄幫助別人，只會讓社會越來越黑暗。我覺得對于你現(xiàn)在而言，練習不是重要的，重要的修改自己的作文，把你自己覺得不妥的地方畫出來，反復替換表達，直到找到最妥帖的為止。然后把這些你覺得特別好的表達和觀點總結(jié)背下來。同時找一些相關(guān)的文章看看，盡量找老外寫的。多積累動詞，多造句，多背精煉的名言，并去體悟里面的道理。好吧，最后講一下如何修改作文，其實很簡單，然后通過英英詞典確定用法以第一段為例，黃色是語法錯誤，綠色是我不確定的地方To begin with, helping others, one regarded as our traditionally moral value, enhance the positive power of our example,Lei Feng , one that always help others in his life, behaved as a positive moral role, teaching children of China to help others and awaking public of their social , we can see that if you do minors to help ones, then those who receive your help are more likely to help others, thus enhancing the positive power of our ，我再給你找一篇參照閱讀我摘錄一點給你看看，如果你有興趣就去看全文把 Basically it means that being a virtuous person is in your selfinterest(It would benefit you).In other words being a moral person has a reward on its example If you see an old man fall and you help him up, it would make you feel good about ，這一段就有三種替換方法：be in your selfinterest, benefit sb., has a reward on its ownBusiness ethics? Hmm..I39。m not can include what Plato said about being a virtuous said virtues are intrinsic to selfinterest。he argued that there are 3 main virtues that we must all have: wisdom, courage and ,（價值或性質(zhì)）固有的，本質(zhì)的，多么牛掰的一個詞，我可以在自己的文章里說： According to Plato, there are 3 main virtues that we must have – wisdom, courage and we give up extending our kindness to others due to fear, we lose the courage to face the evil, the wisdom to judge, the selfdiscipline that keeps the society in instead of walking away and being tortured by the guilt brought by our intrinsic virtue, ing to people’s help is beneficial for both the helpers and the ones in ，而且內(nèi)容立刻深刻了。（我得意的笑~）還有，這句話我找到了一個完整版Virtue is its own reward, and brings with it the truest and highest pleasure。but if we cultivate it only for pleasure39。s sake, we are selfish, not religious, and