【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 9。t go on without the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is , water is being scarce in many 39。s more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste watcr from can39。t live in them any the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people39。s order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent water from being polluted,we must do something to stop all sorts of 正如我們所了解的，動(dòng)植物需要水，人類(lèi)的生產(chǎn)生活也需要水。沒(méi)有水便沒(méi)有生命。隨著工農(nóng)業(yè)的迅速發(fā)展，水的需要量越來(lái)越大。因此，許多地方缺水。而且，許多河流湖泊被工廠排放的污水所污染，魚(yú)不能生存。同時(shí)，廢水給人們的健康帶來(lái)極大的危害。為了保持河流湖泊清潔，防止水污染，我們必須采取措施，阻止各種污染。環(huán)境日英語(yǔ)作文：關(guān)于河水污染的感想根據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于河水污染的感想。，你隨父親去釣魚(yú)，看見(jiàn)河水污染，幾乎釣不到魚(yú)。，后果如何？，我國(guó)政府正在努力采取措施與污染作斗爭(zhēng)。，河水會(huì)變干凈。詞數(shù) 100~ Sunday my father and I went fishing along a found the water so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water this way most of the fish in the river were the river water all over the country is polluted like this，no living things will exist in the we all know，environmental pollution does great harm to living things and human more and more people have e to realize how serious this problem government is doing her best to take measures to fight against expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before ：Water Pollution水污染Spring is tht best season of the weather gets warmer and clas i39。amates and I took a oneday sightseeing around our scene was when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into has caused serious river is being so dirty that no living things can live in river is giving off a terrible make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of is tho source of our is very important to protect ，天氣變得越來(lái)越暖和。我和我的同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了一次環(huán)城一日游，所到之處景色宜人。但當(dāng)我看到沿著城區(qū)流過(guò)的河流時(shí)，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。隨著現(xiàn)代工農(nóng)業(yè)的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的污水排進(jìn)河里，河水被嚴(yán)重污染。河水變得如此的骯臟以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水發(fā)出難聞的氣味。我們急切呼吁采取措施改變這種狀況。政府應(yīng)當(dāng)建立各種設(shè)備，例如污水處理廠，并且鼓勵(lì)科學(xué)家們想出更多更好的辦法以減少水污染。水是生命之源，保護(hù)水資源十分重要。My classmates and I had an outing this had a good meanwhile I noticed that water pollution in our city was being more and more our way, we could see women washing clothes in the was floating on the water produced by a chemical factory was being discharged into the did not see any fish in the fiver was not so clear as quality was very am worriedabout it because water is important to all living can not live without hope people pay more attention to this problem, especially the to control the pollution of water as early as last I would like to say, “To protect water is to protect life.”今年春天，我和我的同學(xué)去春游，我們玩得都很高興。但同時(shí)，我也注意到我們城市的水污染變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重了。沿途我們看到許多婦女在河邊洗衣，河面上漂著垃圾，一家化工廠正將廢水排入河中。河中看不到一條魚(yú)，河水也不像從前那樣清澈了，水質(zhì)很差。對(duì)此我深感擔(dān)憂，因?yàn)樗畬?duì)于所有生物都非常重要。沒(méi)有水人類(lèi)將無(wú)法生存。我希望人們能多關(guān)注這個(gè)問(wèn)題，特別是政府部門(mén)，爭(zhēng)取及早解決水污染問(wèn)題。最后，我想說(shuō)“保護(hù)水就是保護(hù)生命?！钡谖迤河⒄Z(yǔ)高考書(shū)面表達(dá)結(jié)尾模版英語(yǔ)高考書(shū)面表達(dá)結(jié)尾模版結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式1． 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式一：如此結(jié)論說(shuō)完了，畢竟要?dú)w納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論，到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類(lèi)的話，我們馬上停止開(kāi)小差，等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說(shuō)結(jié)束語(yǔ)。也就是說(shuō)，開(kāi)頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：Obviously（此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for “顯而見(jiàn)之”，但說(shuō)無(wú)妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…2． 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二：如此建議如果說(shuō)“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽！Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the ，因?yàn)榭脊俦緛?lái)經(jīng)?？歼@個(gè)句型，而如果我們自己寫(xiě)出來(lái)，你說(shuō)考官會(huì)怎么想呢？更多句型：Accordingly, I remend that some measures be , to solve the problem, some measures should be ：十五、（）假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請(qǐng)你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。要點(diǎn)：時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00至11：00 內(nèi)容：采摘蘋(píng)果報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前 提示：帶帽子、手套 注意：，開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。：社區(qū) munity 第二節(jié)：一、評(píng)分原則，按5個(gè)檔次給分。，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。，從總分中減去2分。：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00：采摘蘋(píng)果：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前：帶帽子、手套【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our munity is going to organize an activity for all the munity Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’ you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of are looking forward to your joining Office 【解析】 本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見(jiàn)的提綱式作文。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)。第一步：審題看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，這樣格式應(yīng)該已經(jīng)給出，審題的重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)和要求上：要點(diǎn)有五項(xiàng)，注意有三項(xiàng)，但注意的第一項(xiàng)是重要的一項(xiàng)。理思路：調(diào)整要點(diǎn)，講清本次活動(dòng)的安排。可以先將活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，要求、注意事項(xiàng)表達(dá)出來(lái)；然后再寫(xiě)5和3要點(diǎn)，這樣邏輯清晰表達(dá)合理。第二步：寫(xiě)作可以先在草紙上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語(yǔ)去表達(dá)，要嘗試最簡(jiǎn)單的復(fù)雜句，如用定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句等，但句式不易過(guò)于復(fù)雜，要用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間、段與段之間過(guò)渡自然。第三步：檢查作文寫(xiě)完后，最后要進(jìn)行檢查。重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全了嗎？時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫(xiě)對(duì)了嗎？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫(xiě)用對(duì)了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫(xiě)在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔?！緦?zhuān)家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】主題與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W校活動(dòng)無(wú)關(guān)，但由于是以涉外小區(qū)為背景所開(kāi)展的社區(qū)活動(dòng)，主題空間更為開(kāi)闊，因此該主題大體符合高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作話題的一般思路，可以歸類(lèi)為外事活動(dòng)。通常，命題以要點(diǎn)形式給出和以漢語(yǔ)題干形式給出，對(duì)考生而言，前者的難度要大于后者。因?yàn)橐c(diǎn)內(nèi)容的呈現(xiàn)一般看不出英語(yǔ)的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，而如果是完整或半完整句式的漢語(yǔ)題干卻能讓考生比較容易辨別出英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)。這本身就是一種便利。因此，對(duì)于各命題單位而言，這幾種形式都應(yīng)該依據(jù)整卷難度的分布情況加以合理配備使用，以免過(guò)難或過(guò)易。十六、（）5月1日，高二（3）班的學(xué)生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽(yáng)光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）開(kāi)展志愿者活動(dòng)（）。假如你是校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的記者，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則100120個(gè)詞的新聞報(bào)道。；；。注意：報(bào)道的標(biāo)題和記者姓名已給出（不記詞數(shù)）。Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【參考范文】Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the ElderlyOn May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly weled, and respectful