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he same time, _________________________________________.⑺ What,s more, _____________________________. _____________.⑻ As a result, __________________. ____________________________ ⑼ As I understand, ______________________________________________ . ⑽ On one hand, ____________________________. ⑾ On the other hand, ___________________________. ⑿ Therefore, __________________________________ on the morning of last Suday I was on the way to school. a car was driving out of a street corner the driver drove so fast. a tragedy I saw a woman riding a bike with her eyes looking up at the sky she was knocked off her bike by the speedy car. the car got out of control and ran into a tree on the roadside both the woman and the driver were injured seriously. both the driver and the passerby are responsible for the accident. the driver was driving too fast the woman was so careless had both of them been careful enough, the tragedy could have been avoided 點(diǎn)評 ⑴ 指出車禍發(fā)生的時間與地點(diǎn) 。 ⑵ 描寫車禍發(fā)生前的情況 。 ⑶ 繼續(xù)說明車禍的發(fā)生前的情況 , 為車禍的發(fā)生做鋪墊 。 ⑷ 總體概括車禍的嚴(yán)重性: tragedy ⑸ 描寫車禍當(dāng)時的場景一:一位婦女不專心騎車 。 ⑹ 描寫車禍當(dāng)時的場景二:被車撞倒 。 ⑺ 車禍發(fā)生當(dāng)時的場景三:車失去控制 , 撞在樹上 。 ⑻ 車禍的結(jié)果:司機(jī)與騎自行者均受傷 。 ⑼ 我對車禍發(fā)生起因的看法:雙方都有責(zé)任 。 ⑽ 車禍發(fā)生的原因一:司機(jī)車速太快 。 ⑾ 車禍發(fā)生的原因二:騎車者不小心 。 ⑿結(jié)論:假設(shè)二人都小心點(diǎn),車禍將不會