【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 rovoking social phenomenon that parents monopolize their children’s going to university, selecting majors to hunting for a job, parents make every crucial decision for their sons and doubt, what the parents do leads to a most serious problem—children are badly dependent on parental morning the children wake up, butthey don’t know what they should do and how they could lose the ability to take care of themselves, and in turn, lose the opportunity to ’t keep on spoiling the children anymore, because they need are some suggestions for , parents should create an independent climate for their , parents should try to help children maintain their , parents should always believe that their children have the ability to make their own decisions in their ASometimes we find there are really many problems/difficulties in how can we manage to overe all these? Step by step, first, , a period of painstaking efforts, I feel that These days we often hear are some possible reasons for the first place, the second place, solve the problem is not easy at all, but it is worth should do something such as _________ to improve the present situation, And I do believe everything will be better in the 、最新四級(jí)作文解析（2011年12月的作文）Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上?！眣ou39。re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by menting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the 39。ve done it hundreds of time.” You39。d write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.” ? 從命題要求中，我們可以看到此次命題的考試內(nèi)容為勵(lì)志型話題，與學(xué)生的日常學(xué)習(xí)生活和人生觀有關(guān)。命題屬于依據(jù)材料來(lái)分析問(wèn)題的文章體裁，對(duì)于這樣的話題，我們可以借用三段式這一模式，首先依據(jù)背景材料來(lái)提出問(wèn)題，“從戒煙的問(wèn)題引出做任何事情都需要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志，需要堅(jiān)持到底，不可半途而廢。”之后分析這一問(wèn)題，可以正反論證，也可舉例論證，此為主體段落，可以通過(guò)“人生要靠自己創(chuàng)造”、“人的潛力無(wú)窮”、“任何苦難和痛苦都是對(duì)自己的挑戰(zhàn)，其收獲到的經(jīng)驗(yàn)將是無(wú)窮的”。也可以引用名人名言，如“where there is a will, there is a way”。最后一段，可以總結(jié)來(lái)論證堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志對(duì)于成功的重大意義。提綱（1）闡述現(xiàn)象“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the ?ve done it hundreds of time.”，并進(jìn)行評(píng)論（2）舉例證明Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will（3）作者的觀點(diǎn)Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillEveryone tries to achieve success in his , someone firmly attains his goal while another ? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might Yatsen was such a of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing meanssteadiness in one39。s work and Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to often worked 15 hours a is short and we have many things to diligence no one can achieve believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant 、寫(xiě)作的注意點(diǎn): ,如：(1)書(shū)名號(hào)(2)頓號(hào)(3)6個(gè)點(diǎn)的省略號(hào)(4)中文形式的句號(hào)第二篇：四級(jí)寫(xiě)作四級(jí)寫(xiě)作孫子云：“知己知彼，百戰(zhàn)不殆”。想在寫(xiě)作考試中獲得成功，就必須首先了解四級(jí)考試的要求和評(píng)分規(guī)則。由于新四級(jí)考試還沒(méi)有開(kāi)始進(jìn)行，筆者就以一篇根據(jù)現(xiàn)行四級(jí)寫(xiě)作題目“Do‘Lucky Numbers’Really Bring Good Luck?”寫(xiě)成的學(xué)生作文為例來(lái)講述幾個(gè)最基本的道理。例文1：Some people think that certian(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤)numbers will bring good luck to such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky are also people who think that their success is related to certain , some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their believe in their own rather than“l(fā)ucky numbers”.They don39。t do things according to certain far as I am concerned, I think it is a person39。s own business whether he believes in a certain number or most important thing is that he has done the work by himself and has done it quite to the belief in numbers, it is their(前后指代不一致，應(yīng)改為his)personal ，根據(jù)15分制的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，這篇例文被評(píng)為14分，供全國(guó)評(píng)卷老師作為評(píng)分參考。乍看起來(lái)，本文無(wú)論從遣詞造句還是思想深度，似乎都算不得一篇佳作；但它之所以能夠被評(píng)為14分，還是有其內(nèi)在深層次原因的，那就是經(jīng)常被考生們所忽視的議論文寫(xiě)作常識(shí)。簡(jiǎn)要地講，可分為以下三個(gè)部分：(一)英文議論文的結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)漢語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作對(duì)文章結(jié)構(gòu)的要求不是很高，如開(kāi)頭段應(yīng)該包括什么、論題句應(yīng)該在什么時(shí)候出現(xiàn)、文章的結(jié)尾是否必須總結(jié)全文等等。而英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作要求文章結(jié)構(gòu)必須十分嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，文章各個(gè)部分的功能都要十分清晰，開(kāi)頭、中間和結(jié)尾都有嚴(yán)格的要求。簡(jiǎn)而言之，英語(yǔ)議論文共有三大特點(diǎn)：觀點(diǎn)鮮明的開(kāi)頭；緊扣主題的結(jié)尾；有主題句并且銜接自然的中間段落。這三點(diǎn)當(dāng)中，第2點(diǎn)早已為絕大多數(shù)中國(guó)學(xué)生所熟知，因?yàn)殚_(kāi)頭點(diǎn)題和結(jié)尾扣題同樣也是漢語(yǔ)文章的要求。但在長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中，這樣的要求被很多學(xué)生以為是“老土”而得不到足夠的重視。如果將這種思想帶到英語(yǔ)議論文寫(xiě)作當(dāng)中，直接的后果就是中心分散、觀點(diǎn)不明確，加上中國(guó)學(xué)生普遍英文表達(dá)能力不強(qiáng)，這些因素就為整篇文章的失敗埋下了隱患。另外，英語(yǔ)文章和漢語(yǔ)不同的是段落的主題句一定要放在段首，而不能按照中文的寫(xiě)作習(xí)慣放在段落的中間或者最后，在英文應(yīng)試寫(xiě)作中更加如此。正因?yàn)闆](méi)有“主題句”的思想，所以中國(guó)學(xué)生在寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)文章時(shí)經(jīng)?！跋氲绞裁矗蛯?xiě)什么”，這在英語(yǔ)議論文中是不能接受的。例如，例文1中每一段的首句都簡(jiǎn)要地概括出了該段的主要內(nèi)容，換句話說(shuō)，每段的內(nèi)容都是根據(jù)首句來(lái)展開(kāi)的，其順序不能顛倒。(關(guān)于段落的銜接，在后面的內(nèi)容中將詳細(xì)介紹。)(二)中心統(tǒng)一在中心統(tǒng)一這個(gè)問(wèn)題上，英語(yǔ)議論文和漢語(yǔ)議論文的概念也有所不同。中國(guó)人在寫(xiě)議論文時(shí)常常遵循“中庸”的原則，其具體的表現(xiàn)就是認(rèn)為世界上沒(méi)有任何事情是絕對(duì)的。當(dāng)他們?cè)谖恼轮斜頁(yè)P(yáng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的時(shí)候，總要指出其不足；同樣，在批評(píng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的同時(shí)，也總不忘記指出其也有合理之處。這種做法從道理上來(lái)講并沒(méi)有什么不妥，但卻不符合英語(yǔ)議論文的寫(xiě)作習(xí)慣，因?yàn)橛⒄Z(yǔ)作家在寫(xiě)議論文時(shí)關(guān)注的是自己的辯論技巧和其結(jié)果對(duì)公眾的影響力。換句話說(shuō)，如果作者告訴大家兩面都有道理也就等于說(shuō)兩面都沒(méi)有道理，因?yàn)樽x者在讀了文章之后仍舊不知道作者的看法是什么，以及自己在這種情況下到底該怎么做。所以，既然四級(jí)考試考的是英語(yǔ)文章，大家就應(yīng)該遵循英文議論文的寫(xiě)作思路和習(xí)慣：表示支持則旗幟鮮明地支持；表示反對(duì)就徹徹底底地反對(duì)，而不能采取“墻頭草兩邊倒”的做法。以上面的例文1為例，如果作者的觀點(diǎn)是“幸運(yùn)數(shù)字是既有道理又無(wú)道理的”，這種觀點(diǎn)就無(wú)法讓人接受，因?yàn)樵谟⒄Z(yǔ)議論文中，這是典型的中心不統(tǒng)一大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作常用經(jīng)典句型1）主語(yǔ)從句It is mon knowledge that honesty is the best is wellknown that…It is selfevident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that… It is / that 2）賓（表）語(yǔ)從句 We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his problem is not who will go, but who will ）定語(yǔ)從句（限定性和非限定性）As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…, There are many reasons why I want to study in your is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge ）狀語(yǔ)從句（時(shí)間，原因，地點(diǎn)，條件，讓步，轉(zhuǎn)折等）When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke bees a monster（怪物）which will devour the reason, there are still some problems with student use of ）分詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ) came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English ）倒裝句Only through these measures can we hope to solve the around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot ）被動(dòng)句Some measures should be taken to deal with the is said to have acplished a lot of great people