【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ad news.(修正)Hearing the bad news , the young man couldn’t help ，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運(yùn)用倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句等。復(fù)合句可以把結(jié)構(gòu)松散的句子連接起來，從而使表達(dá)顯得更加高級。（1）定語從句（原文）Mary is a girl in Class speaks English very fluently.(修正)Mary is a girl in class 1, who speaks English very fluently.(2)狀語從句（原文）The doctor arrived there in boy was was not too late.(修正)The boy was saved because the doctor arrived there before it was too late.(3)名詞性從句（包括主語從句、表語從句、賓語從句和同位語從句）（原文）Xiao Ming was always late for teacher didn’t know why.(修正)His teacher didn’t know why Xiao Ming was always late for school.(4)強(qiáng)調(diào)句（原文）My parents praised Ah Fu had saved my little sister bravely.(修正)My parents praised Ah Fu was Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.(5)倒裝句（原文）We can achieve our goal only in this way.(修正)Only in this way can we achieve our goal.（原文）I have never seen such a wonderful film before.(修正)Never before have I seen such a wonderful 、with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等，增強(qiáng)句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。（1）it 作形式主語和形式賓語（原文）To reduce pollution and keep the earth clean is our responsibility.(修正)It is our responsibility to reduce pollution and keep the earth clean.(2)分詞短語（原文）We had a short we began to play sang and told played chess.(修正)After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling stories and playing chess.(3)with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)由“with+名詞/代詞+分詞/動詞不定式/形容詞/副詞/介詞短語”構(gòu)成，通常在句中作狀語，表示謂語動作發(fā)生的時間、原因、條件、方式、和伴隨狀況等。有時，with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)也可作后置定語。如：With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, many of us are getting more and more nervous.（with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)表示伴隨狀況）They came to a small village with mountain all around it.(with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語)（4）獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)由“名詞代詞+分詞/動詞不定式/形容詞/副詞/介詞短語”構(gòu)成，通常在句中做狀語。使用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)也是提升書面表達(dá)檔次、獲取高分的重要手段。如：（原文）If time permits, you can pay a visit to the Summer Palace.(修正)Time permitting, you can pay a visit to the Summer ．如何避免漢語式表達(dá)為了減少漢語式表達(dá)對英語寫作的影響，考生必須改變傳統(tǒng)的思維模式。在英語寫作中，要有意識地培養(yǎng)自己的英語思維能力，熟悉英語各類文章的文體特點(diǎn)、寫作模式和習(xí)慣用語。積累大量地道的、表達(dá)有力的英語句型，并在平時的寫作中積極嘗試和反復(fù)練習(xí)。漢語式英語例析。誤：His home broke out a fire last ：析：break out 是不及物動詞短語，其后不能接賓語。誤：Mother agreed me to see a film this ：Mother allowed me to see a film this ：agree 不可接不定式作賓語補(bǔ)足語。，她的眼淚都流出來了。誤：Hearing the news, tears came to her ：析：現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語時，其邏輯主語必須是句子的主語。，他的父親就去世了。誤：At the age of four, his father ：析：本例用at the age of 作狀語，其邏輯主語應(yīng)是句子的主語，但這與語意不相符合。誤：The price of the coat is very ：析：表示價格的詞price 只能用“高”或“低”，即high 或low來修飾，而不能像漢語一樣用“貴”或“賤”來形容。誤：He robbed my wallet ：析：表示“搶劫某人或某物”時，要用“rob +被搶劫的人或地方+of+被搶劫物”結(jié)構(gòu)，of 與其后的內(nèi)容有時可以省略。誤：The population of Shanghai is more than that of ：析：population 是不可數(shù)名詞，說“人口多或少”要用large 或small(比較級larger 或smaller), 不能受漢語的影響，用many 或few(比較級more 或fewer)。誤：I will see you if I am ：析：convenient 只修飾事物不修飾人，常用的結(jié)構(gòu)是： convenient tosb./ It’s convenient to sb./ It’s convenient to do 。誤：This question is very difficult to be ：析：be difficult(hard,easy,etc.)to do 結(jié)構(gòu)中的動詞do 與主語之間在邏輯上存在動賓關(guān)系時，用主動形式表示被動意義。誤：We are impossible to finish the work on ：析：impossible /possible 的主語一般是事（物）而不是人。常見的結(jié)構(gòu)是It is impossible for sb to do 。誤：The weather here is muc