【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 sofa and look at the a lot of people enjoy doing this, the undoubted truth is that people are being more passive simply because there is no interaction and no efforts on also contributes to the fact that people nowadays are more distant to each most of our free time is taken away by the act of watching TV, we can no longer find enough time to visit friends, call on relatives or go to interesting is also true within a family, parents and children and other members are less close to each other, because family gettogethers and conversations are disturbed by TV—when one member is watching TV, he would like others to keep course I am not denying the great conveniences and huge benefits the TV brings us, but to make it a really blessing to us, we should try to avoid its negative effects.第三篇：英語(yǔ)專業(yè)四級(jí)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)四級(jí)作文一、四級(jí)作文的要求、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及評(píng)卷實(shí)例(一)四級(jí)考試對(duì)作文的要求《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)考試大綱》明確規(guī)定：四級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作考試時(shí)間為30分鐘。要求應(yīng)試者寫(xiě)出一篇不少于120個(gè)的短文：寫(xiě)作命題源于日常生活和有關(guān)科技、社會(huì)文化等方面的一般常識(shí)，不涉及知識(shí)面過(guò)廣、專業(yè)性太強(qiáng)的內(nèi)容。其命題方式有：給出題目、或規(guī)定隋景，或給段首句續(xù)寫(xiě)；或給出關(guān)鍵詞寫(xiě)短文、或看圖作文。要求內(nèi)容切題，文理通順，表達(dá)正確，語(yǔ)義連貫，無(wú)重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。(二)四級(jí)考試作文評(píng)分原則。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和評(píng)卷實(shí)例1．評(píng)分原則．四級(jí)考試作文采用總體評(píng)分(GLOBAL SCORING)的方法，即把內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言作為一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。主要是看內(nèi)容是否切題，表達(dá)是否充分，所用語(yǔ)言是否能清楚而明確地表達(dá)思想。評(píng)卷人員根據(jù)思想內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的總體印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分（REWARD SCORES），并不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤的多少扣分。2．評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)作文題滿分為15分。閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分為五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。5分——基本切題，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。8分——基本切題，表達(dá)思想比較清楚，文字尚連貫，但語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多。11分——切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。14分——切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫較好，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。0分——白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想。閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)檔次(如8分)相似，即定為(8分)，若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或劣于該檔次，則可加一分(9分)或減一分(7分)，但不得加減半分。字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分：110119詞：扣1分； 100109詞：扣2分；9099詞：扣3分；8089分：扣5分： 50以下詞：扣9分*作文最低分： 6分題目： Bicycles: An Important Means of Transport in China提綱：（1）為什么自行車(chē)在中國(guó)這樣普及（2）和汽車(chē)的比較（3）自行車(chē)在中國(guó)的前途 Score: 14Bicycles are very popular in every family in the city has two or three the rush hour,you can see that thousands of peopleman and woman, old and youngride theft bicycles to work and is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles.”Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many , they are cheap, convenient and easy to ,riding bicycle is good for , they bring no noise nor air cars are faster and more fortable, they are too consume plenty of oil and they pollute the , it is difficult for a driver to park his they often cause traffic jams and my opinion, the future of bicycle is very China is a developing country, and has a large population,I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present will be an important means of transportation for quite a long : 11There millions of bicycles in today’s are very important means of transport in people39。 s daily to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider39。 s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in with a car, a bicycle is much is more suitable for China as a developing a bicyclehas almost caused no pollution but a car the countary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a think the population of China39。 s bicycle will be kept for the long it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number ofbicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it39。 s quality will be : 8Bicycle is an important means of transport in important reason of it is the economy of use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high can only afford a bicycle, and they have nomoney to buy a car which is too Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work or go to travel and so other reason is the large population of these made the bicycle bee the important means of bicycle, pared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface ofputting doesn39。t ask to build the garage like point is very important to China, because of the lack of isn39。 t too expensive, so Chinese can afford doesn39。 t need any oil, and it can39。 t cause the of these are the good needs pared to the the future, bicycle will be widely it will be in good will produce much more modem: 5Perhaps the amount of bicycle in China is the largest in the was it so widely used in China? I thought the answer was: the population in China is too large and the price of bicycle is much third answer is that thebicycle is easier in using than other with the car, the bicycle is cheaper and it is easier in using than the car, but its speed is lower than