【正文】 buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider39。2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。其命題方式有：給出題目、或規(guī)定隋景，或給段首句續(xù)寫(xiě)；或給出關(guān)鍵詞寫(xiě)短文、或看圖作文。s more, exercise will help you get rid of your you keep doing exercise regularly, you will never be a lazy , exercise has great effect on one39。they do not enable him to seek more and more knowledge, but induce lower the standards of teaching, for they deprive the teacher of all themselves are often judged by examination results and instead of teaching their subjects, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques which they most successful candidates are not always the best educated。t go in are more determined to improve the means by which we forecast earthquakes with more should build houses which can survive the destructive we also should better the mechanism to face the emergencies and for economic life, crises are not always rendered these times, we can stop the race of fast economy to speculate about some fundamental issues of humanity such as how much highspeed development in this way can contribute to the wellbeing of human take my own country for course, in the past two decades or so, our economy has gained the highest speed man has haven39。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和評(píng)卷實(shí)例1．評(píng)分原則．四級(jí)考試作文采用總體評(píng)分(GLOBAL SCORING)的方法，即把內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言作為一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。11分——切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 s quality will be : 8Bicycle is an important means of transport in important reason of it is the economy of use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high can only afford a bicycle, and they have nomoney to buy a car which is too Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work or go to travel and so other reason is the large population of these made the bicycle bee the important means of bicycle, pared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface ofputting doesn39。 s developing firmly believe that Bicycle will replaced by car or motorcycle in thatnearly undoubtfully it continue the important means of transport in China for a long Selectively Or Extensively?Outline:Score: 11When it es to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agreewith them, they think that reading extensively is people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad good books can give us pleasure and knowledge while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad , the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us oneaspect of the best book only contains one field of , they can easily e to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”.So they believe that reading extensively is my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as this way, we canincrease the quality and quantity of :5I think reading not only selectively but also the two sides arenot contradict．Our time islimited．So we can not read every book in the world．However, we will not be interested in every book．We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like．But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge，news and so on，it also make ours bee a wise man．0n the one handreading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted．Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read．On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life．They are all useful to ours．Score: 2Most people thought that read books should have been others belived reading extentively was books or reading extensively?Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,on one hand, There are too book to read for should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for another hand, Someone39。tread bad books, we must read others may not emphasize that today39。但我覺(jué)得我的復(fù)習(xí)方法有的你還時(shí)可以借鑒的，你可以看看，希望有所幫助。所謂知己知彼，百戰(zhàn)百勝。給自 己制定一個(gè)詳細(xì)的時(shí)間表，比如說(shuō)星期一干什么，星期二干什么。進(jìn)行了一段時(shí)間的單項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練后，每個(gè)部分的優(yōu)劣點(diǎn)進(jìn)一步 明顯。在進(jìn)行了單項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練和專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練后，接下來(lái)要做的就是對(duì)試 卷的整體把握。距離考試的最后一個(gè)月，不要再去做新的試題，我想在之 前的復(fù)習(xí)中你已經(jīng)做的足夠多了。否則，你會(huì) 突然發(fā)現(xiàn)自己有好多單詞不會(huì)寫(xiě)，作文也不知道怎么寫(xiě)，對(duì)自己的自信心是一個(gè) 強(qiáng)烈的打擊?？荚嚨那耙惶熘吝M(jìn)考場(chǎng)的前一分鐘，不要再思考關(guān)于考試 的任何事情（當(dāng)然不包括準(zhǔn)備考試用具），做你最想做的事情或者做能讓你放松 的事情，比如上網(wǎng)，聽(tīng)歌啊。這里 所說(shuō)的做題不光是做題，還要把你做過(guò)的每道題都弄懂弄透，做到融會(huì)貫通，舉 一反三。注意，在這個(gè)階段中，其他單項(xiàng)的訓(xùn)練仍然繼續(xù)，只是根據(jù)自己的具體情況進(jìn)行 了增加或減少。還有，今日事，今日畢，每 天制定的任務(wù)一定要完成，千萬(wàn)不要把今天的任務(wù)放到明天做，否則打亂了復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃，對(duì)你今后的復(fù)習(xí)有影響。通過(guò)這樣的測(cè)試，你可以真切知道自己的 優(yōu)劣點(diǎn)在那里，從而