20xx考研英語：應(yīng)用文寫作之道歉信(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時進行寫作。【得分要點】題目是常規(guī)的書信作文，要求寫一封道歉信，是應(yīng)用文的一種。寫作的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，表達(dá)歉意的同時，還要與對方另約時間。因此，不僅僅是一封道歉信。寫作時注意涵蓋所有要點，還要兼顧上下文的連貫性?！緟⒖挤段摹?Dear Bob, I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that hope the change will not cause you too much we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school not, let me know what time suits you should be available any time after school next forward to your early , Li HuaDear Bob, How are you doing? We planned to go to the bookstore this , I can’t make , I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to I wish I could go with you!However, I am chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate petition with an America high school, which, you know, is of great importance to me, for I have always been dreaming to have a chance like this to improve my spoken a result, I have no choice but to say sorry to about going to the bookshop this Sunday? Then both of us will be available and I can share my experience of the petition with am looking forward to your , Li Hua 2013山東卷 【真題再現(xiàn)】假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時回復(fù)。請根據(jù)以下要點給他回封郵件：；（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）?！窘?jīng)典套路】第一段：問候+寫信背景+寫信目的 第二段：“道歉”部分(相當(dāng)于“寫信背景”)第三段：“假期安排”部分 第四段：補充說明+客套話 【高分范文】 Dear Tom, How are you doing?(問候)You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the ing summer vacation.(寫信背景)I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(寫信目的)How I wish I would read and reply your as soon as I received , I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for a result, I had no choice but to pletely focus on my believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段為道歉信常見套路)By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主題句)First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1)Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2)Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)These are my plan for the summer ’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套話結(jié)尾)Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua【滿分佳作】 Dear Tom, ①I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your which you sent me a week ago immediately.②I was so occupied with the final for the ing summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fastfood restaurant.③Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it.④And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of , I’ll go to Ya’an to work as a volunteer.⑤There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help.⑥I hope what I will do will make a great difference to you have anything for the summer? Please write to me and let me sincerely, Li Hua【滿分賞析】①先用I’m terribly sorry…對未能及時回信道歉，terribly加強了道歉的語氣。②接著簡單講
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