20xx考研英語(yǔ)：應(yīng)用文寫作之道歉信-在線瀏覽
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【正文】 day have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that hope the change will not cause you too much we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school not, let me know what time suits you should be available any time after school next forward to your early , Li HuaDear Bob, How are you doing? We planned to go to the bookstore this , I can’t make , I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to I wish I could go with you!However, I am chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate petition with an America high school, which, you know, is of great importance to me, for I have always been dreaming to have a chance like this to improve my spoken a result, I have no choice but to say sorry to about going to the bookshop this Sunday? Then both of us will be available and I can share my experience of the petition with am looking forward to your , Li Hua 2013山東卷 【真題再現(xiàn)】假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)?！窘?jīng)典套路】第一段：?jiǎn)柡?寫信背景+寫信目的 第二段：“道歉”部分(相當(dāng)于“寫信背景”)第三段：“假期安排”部分 第四段：補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明+客套話 【高分范文】 Dear Tom, How are you doing?(問(wèn)候)You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the ing summer vacation.(寫信背景)I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(寫信目的)How I wish I would read and reply your as soon as I received , I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for a result, I had no choice but to pletely focus on my believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段為道歉信常見(jiàn)套路)By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主題句)First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1)Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2)Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)These are my plan for the summer ’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套話結(jié)尾)Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua【滿分佳作】 Dear Tom, ①I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your which you sent me a week ago immediately.②I was so occupied with the final for the ing summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fastfood restaurant.③Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it.④And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of , I’ll go to Ya’an to work as a volunteer.⑤There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help.⑥I hope what I will do will make a great difference to you have anything for the summer? Please write to me and let me sincerely, Li Hua【滿分賞析】①先用I’m terribly sorry…對(duì)未能及時(shí)回信道歉，terribly加強(qiáng)了道歉的語(yǔ)氣。③Not only…but also… 連接并列句，屬于本書在“寫作基礎(chǔ)”部分訓(xùn)練的句型。④運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句修飾地點(diǎn)，使句式避免簡(jiǎn)單化；places of interest(名勝古跡)也運(yùn)用得當(dāng)。⑤運(yùn)用了There is no doubt that…(……毫無(wú)疑問(wèn))這樣的萬(wàn)能句型；be badly in need of help(急需幫助)這一短語(yǔ)也使評(píng)卷老師眼前一亮。本篇句句高級(jí)、詞詞地道，怎能不拿滿分？ 【模擬題1】假設(shè)你是李華，前天是你的外國(guó)朋友An
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