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rt),同學(xué)的幫助祝愿:考生自擬注意:詞數(shù):不少于80詞。開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。發(fā)言稿需包含所給提示內(nèi)容,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。濱州:菏澤:假如你是Mike,你的朋友Susan近來心情不好,請你給她發(fā)一封Email,提出合理性的建議,幫助她調(diào)適心情。字?jǐn)?shù):80100字(首尾句已給出,不記入所要求的總字?jǐn)?shù))。供你參考的建議有:sing, take a walk, do sports, write the diary, watch TV, listen to music, go shopping, go swimming, go outside…范文:Dear Susan,When you are not feeling well, the following suggestions may be suitable for you: outside!Do something example, take a walk, go swimming, or just lie on the grass and watch clouds something you39。re good at!If you love to sing, then go to turn on some music and sing loudly! a down your thoughts, dreams, problems or anything you want!In all, if you want to feel well about yourself, you must believe in yourself!Best wishes!泰安:第三節(jié) 寫作(共1題,滿分15分)今年6月5日世界環(huán)境日的主題是倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活”,老師就“節(jié)能減排”問題組織了一場主題討論:日常生活中,我們能為保護(hù)環(huán)境、減少污染做些什么?請用英語寫一篇不少于80詞的短文,談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。參考詞匯:discussion, protect the environment, be caused by, ordinary people, instead of driving cars, use plastic bags, cut down on, recycle, natural food, save energy, reduce pollutions__________________________________范文:(一)One possible version:Our class had a discussion about protecting the is my think the environment is one of our biggest was found out that a lot of air pollution is actually caused by ordinary people, not just by big are so many things each one of us can do every 39。s best for people to take buses or walk instead of driving should stop to use plastic bags for can cut down on waste, recycle trash and eat more natural these ways we can save energy and reduce pollutions.(二)評分說明:評分原則(1)評分時(shí),先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡量,確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。(2)評分時(shí),應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。(3)拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面,評分時(shí),應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。(4)如果書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。各檔次的給分范圍和要求第一檔(1315分)很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚,沒有或基本沒有語言錯(cuò)誤;書寫工整;字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第二擋(1012分)較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖漏掉2個(gè)次重點(diǎn),但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;應(yīng)用的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖不太豐富,但能滿足任務(wù)的要求;句子較通順、表達(dá)較清楚;有少量語言錯(cuò)誤;書寫工整;字?jǐn)?shù)基本符合要求。達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第三檔(79分)基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;應(yīng)用的語言結(jié)構(gòu)單一;句子不夠通順,行文不夠連貫;語言錯(cuò)誤較多;書寫不夠工整,字?jǐn)?shù)較少。整體而言,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第四檔(06分)未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容,寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容;應(yīng)用的語言結(jié)構(gòu)單一且不規(guī)范;句子不通順,行文不連貫;語言錯(cuò)誤多;書寫潦草,字?jǐn)?shù)不足50。信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。萊蕪:八、書面表達(dá)(共1題,計(jì)20分)2010年4月,青海玉樹發(fā)生了地震(earthquake),家園、學(xué)校受到了損壞。一名災(zāi)區(qū)的學(xué)生(Zhuoma)下周將來你們班。她將在你們班學(xué)習(xí)一年。請根據(jù)表格提示,用英語寫一篇短文,談?wù)勀銓⑷绾螏椭?,并適當(dāng)寫出自己的想法。卓瑪(Zhuoma):年齡:13歲,家鄉(xiāng):青海玉樹。On weekdays:1.帶她參觀校園,2.送她學(xué)習(xí)用品,3.在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助她,4.......。On weekends:1.請她來家里,2.一起吃飯,3……。注意:字?jǐn)?shù)要控制在80100詞左右。不要出現(xiàn)你的姓名和學(xué)校信息。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Zhuoma will e to our class next week.She39。s from范文:(一)One possible version:Zhuoma is a 13yearold will e to our class next 39。s from Yushu, her hometown, she couldn39。t go to school because of the 39。ll study with us for a her new classmate, I39。ll try my best to help she es, I39。ll introduce my friends to her and show her around our weekdays, I39。m going to give her some school 39。m good at English, so I can help her with her 39。ll help her join our English she is lonely on can invite her to my 39。ll have dinner , we can play games or watch 39。ll do my best to make her happy and feel at my opinion, all Chinese e from a should help each other.(二)評分說明:要求考生用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、句式和詞語,完整準(zhǔn)確地表述所提示的內(nèi)容,書寫工整。分四檔評分:1.短文通順完整,表達(dá)清楚,語言基本元誤,l720分;2.短文較通順完整,表達(dá)基本清楚,語言有少量錯(cuò)誤,l216分;3.能寫明基本要點(diǎn),短文不夠通順完整,語言有較多錯(cuò)誤,但尚能達(dá)意,611分;4.僅能寫明部分要點(diǎn),短文不完整,語言錯(cuò)誤多,影響意思表達(dá),05分。第四篇:全國各地中考作文題目集錦