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here)發(fā)生了什么事 (what)。 ___________________________________________________________________ (2) 其次是事件發(fā)展的過(guò)程。 (3) 事件的內(nèi)容比較多,接下來(lái)可以按照時(shí)間發(fā)展順序進(jìn)行各信息點(diǎn)的敘述。 (4) 最后就是事件的評(píng)價(jià)和感受。 上星期六下午,我正和朋友在中山公園的湖邊散步,突然聽(tīng)見(jiàn)湖中一個(gè)女孩在呼救。 1). 上星期六下午,我 正 和朋友在中山公園的湖邊散步, 突然 聽(tīng)見(jiàn)湖中一個(gè)女孩在呼救。 On the afternoon of last Saturday, my friend and I were walking by the lake in Zhongshan Park when suddenly we heard a girl calling for help in the lake. 2). 我們 趕緊 跳進(jìn)湖中,把她拉上來(lái),并對(duì)她做了人工呼吸。 We hurried to jump into the lake , pulled her out and made her breathe using the mouthtomouth way. 3). 孩子恢復(fù)知覺(jué) 后 ,被送進(jìn)醫(yī)院。 After the girl came to herself, she was sent to hospital . 4). 與此同時(shí) ,我們打電話(huà)通知孩子的家長(zhǎng)。 Meanwhile, we telephoned the girl39。s parents. ,醫(yī)生對(duì)我們的急救給予高度評(píng)價(jià)。 Her parents were very thankful to us and the doctors thought highly of our first aid. ,懂得急救知識(shí)很重要。 The accident made us realize that knowing first aid is very important for everyone. : … . [參考范文 ] On the afternoon of last Saturday, my friend and I were walking by the lake in Zhongshan Park when suddenly we heard a girl calling for help in