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ble to give me some advices (改為advice) about what I should do. I have written some articles during my spare time and I am sent(改為sending) you two of them with this letter. I hope that you won39。t mind looking at it (改為them) and telling me whether you think they are good or not. I would appreciate any ments you have because I am keen to learn. I too(改為also)wonder if you could advise me on a few other matters. Do you think it is better to do course(在course前面加一個a) in journalism at a college and(改為or) to try to get a job a junior reporter as soon as I will(刪除will) finish school? (from ) Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua(寫作)A)One possible version (from )Dear Manag