【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 lso pleasure. I use my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pouring down. It can also be very danger. Of course I will be very careful on my bike. In facts, accidents are not the only problem. One day I went to school and e back to find his front wheel was missing. It was a long walk to the repairer’s shop. Now I have two strong locks. 【 答案與解析 】 1. 去掉 but。 漢語可說 “雖然 …… 但是 ……” ，但 英語習(xí)慣 上不能相 應(yīng)地說 though…but… 。 (注：不能去掉 though，因?yàn)檫@樣還會(huì)涉及大小寫的改動(dòng)，而高考 短文改錯(cuò) 每行只允許改動(dòng)一處。 ) 2. find 后加 it。此 it 為形式賓語，真正的賓語是其后的 不定式 。 3. Ride 改為 Riding。動(dòng)詞 原形 不能用作主語，要改為 動(dòng)名詞 。 4. on 改為 in。表示在某個(gè)季節(jié)，用 介詞 in。 5. can 后加 be。此句缺謂語動(dòng)詞。 6. danger 改為 dangerous。用形容詞作表語。 7. facts 改為 fact。 in fact 為習(xí)語，意為 “事實(shí)上 ”。 8. e 改為 came。 came 與其前的 went 為并列謂語。 9. his 改為 my。前后使用代詞應(yīng)一致。 10. 此行無錯(cuò)。 The English Corner in Zhongshan Park is where people go to practise their speaking English. Every Sunday afternoon they gather around, talk to each other in English. Among they are students, teachers, doctors, and so on. I first went to an English Corner when I was in Junior Grade Two. I went there on every Sunday and chat with some people in English. In the past three years I had never been absent. I’m sure I’ve made some progresses in my listening and speaking. And I have made many friends there. The English Comer is really good place. I hope that more friends will join in us. 【 答案與解析 】 1. 此行無錯(cuò)。 2. 把 speaking 改為 spoken。 “英語口語 ”是 spoken English。 3. 把 talk 改為 talking。用 現(xiàn)在分詞 作伴隨狀語。 4. 把 they 改為 them。人稱代詞作 介詞 among 的賓語，因此要用賓格。這是個(gè) 倒裝句， among them 是表語，主語是 students, teachers… 。 5. 去掉 on。在 every Sunday /week/ day 之類的時(shí)間狀語前，不用 介詞 。 6. 把 chat 改為 chatted。 chatted 與 went 并列，指最初去英語角的情況。 7. 把 had 改為 have。因?yàn)?in the past/last few years 常與現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)連用。 8. 把 progresses 改為 progress。因?yàn)? progress 是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有 復(fù)數(shù)形式 。 9. 在 is 后加上 a。后面的 place 是單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞。 10. 去掉 join 后面的 in。 join in 是指參加某項(xiàng)活動(dòng) (即以表示活動(dòng)的名詞用其賓語 )；表示加入到某個(gè)組織并成為其中的一員，或與某人一起，要用 join。 Behind my apartment, there is used to be a dirty and messy er. Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees. Broken bottles were left laying here and there. There was a damaging car in the center. The whole er gave off an unpleasant smell. One year ago, we decided to turn it in a beautiful park. Since then, great changes have been taken place in that er. All the rubbish have been cleared away. Flowers and young trees have planted all over. Now birds e here to sing, children e here to play, and adults e here to enjoy our peaceful life. It has taken on a new look. 【 答案與解析 】 1. 去掉 is。根據(jù)下文是 “曾經(jīng)有 一位 ……” ，所以用 there used to be… 。 2. hanged 改為 hung。因?yàn)?hang 作 “懸掛 ”解，是不 規(guī)則動(dòng)詞 ，其過去式是 hung；作 “絞死 ”解，才是 規(guī)則動(dòng)詞 ，過去式是 hanged。 3. laying 改為 lying。此句是 leave…doing…( 讓 …… 處于某種狀態(tài) )的被動(dòng)式；表示狀態(tài)的 “在、位于 ”，用 lie，其 現(xiàn)在分詞 是 lying；而 laying 是及物動(dòng)詞 lay(放置 )的 現(xiàn)在分詞 。 4. damaging 改為 damaged。因?yàn)?car 與 damage 是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用 過去分詞 作定語。 5. in 改為 into。因?yàn)楸硎?“把 …… 變成 ……” 是用短語 turn…into… 。 6. 去掉 been。因?yàn)椴蝗サ?been, 就是 被動(dòng)語態(tài) 了，而 take place 是不及物動(dòng)詞，無 被動(dòng)語態(tài) 。 7. have 改為 has。因?yàn)橹髡Z rubbish 是不可數(shù)名詞，所以謂主用單數(shù)。 8. 在 planted 前加 been。因?yàn)橹^語動(dòng)詞 plant 與主語是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，要用 被動(dòng)語態(tài) 。 9. 此行正確。 10. our 改為 their。因?yàn)樵诖酥复氖?adults。 It is important to do with the rubbish in cities. Rubbish must be treated properly. Thus, it may cause a lot of problems. It may pollute ___ the air and water. When people breathe the polluted air or drink polluted ___ water, we may get ill. Our city has begun to pay attention to the roblem. _______ As far as I know, some rubbish is sorted and sent to different factory. ____ Rubbish, such as old newspapers and glass, are recycled. Some harmful ___ rubbish is sent to a certain place and buried. Waste air is cleaned after it _______ goes into the air. Waste water is treated before it poured into rivers. To ___ protect from the environment, the government has passed laws to prevent people from throwing rubbish everywhere. We should do our ___ best to take good care of the environment and fight against pollution. 【 答案與解析 】 1. 把 do 改為 deal。 do with 表示 “處理 ”只能用于與 what 連用的疑問句中，否則，它是 “需要、想要、忍受 ”之意 (常與 can, could 連用 )。 2. 把 thus 改為 otherwise。前后不是因果關(guān)系，而是 “否則 ”“如果不處理好的話，就會(huì) …” 。 3. 在 drink 后加 the。 the polluted air 與 the polluted air 是并列關(guān)系，特指 前句提到的那些被污染了的空氣和水。 4. 把 we改為 they。因?yàn)樘娲氖乔懊娴?people。 5. 把 factory 改為 factories。不同的工廠，當(dāng)然不只一家。 6. 把 are 改為 is。因?yàn)橹髡Z是 rubbish，是單數(shù)，當(dāng)然用 is。 7. 把 after 改為 before。由前后意義的邏輯關(guān)系所知。 8. 在 poured 前面加 is。因?yàn)?it(waste water)與 pour(倒 )是被動(dòng)關(guān)系。 9. 去掉 protect 后面的 from。 protect 本身是及物動(dòng)詞， protect…from… 意為 “保護(hù) … 免受 …” 。 10. 此行正確。 How many time do you spend with your parents? Your parents are your dearer people in the world when you are young. And they always care of you