初三英語作文寫作指導(dǎo)fromteens(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ur friends. What’s more, we should be kind to others and try to offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.In my opinion, treating others in an honest way is also a good way to get on well with others. I am sure these suggestions will help us to get along well with others.幫助別人的樂趣在學(xué)習(xí)與生活中你一定幫助過他人。你校校報(bào)正在開展以“我助人，我快樂”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)提示用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀阒说墓适?，讓大家與你一起分享助人的快樂。1. 寫作要點(diǎn)提示：1） 幫助的對象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、原因；2） 助人的具體過程（你是如何幫助他人的）；3） 被助人的反應(yīng)及你助人后的感受。2. 寫作要求：短文的內(nèi)容包含所提示的要點(diǎn)，語言要流暢，可圍繞提示要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使短文的意思連貫；短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名；短文的字?jǐn)?shù)在90詞左右。解析這是一篇敘事性文章，結(jié)構(gòu)可以用總–分–總的形式，內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)在于敘述和描寫，要重點(diǎn)把who，when，where，why，what，how寫清楚，即：誰在哪里何時(shí)做了何事，為什么要做，及最后的感受。一、題目要點(diǎn)、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、原因；（你是如何幫助他人的）；。二、寫作提綱時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱：第一人稱、第三人稱內(nèi)容：助人的故事及幫助人和被助人雙方的感受三、語言組織重點(diǎn)詞組：be good at。 help with。 ask sb for sth。 give up。 learn from。 make great progress重點(diǎn)句型：not only…but also...四、過渡銜接為了使文章句子之間上下連貫，有邏輯性，可以在寫作過程中穿插一些時(shí)間狀語和連詞?！疽活愇摹縀veryone needs help and I’ve learned a lot from helping Mike.I was not good at math in the beginning. Months ago, my teacher asked me to help my classmate Mike with his math because he wanted to give it up after he failed some exams. Before helping him I felt a little nervous, so I went over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercises. To my surprise, I could even work out some difficult problems that I couldn’t understand before. Every day I helped Mike go over what he had learnt
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