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the cost of renting a house has increased. 4. 連貫性( Coherence) Her voice was clear, deep and with resonance(洪亮) . Her voice was clear, deep and resonant(洪亮的) . 并列結(jié)構(gòu)必須是同類的結(jié)構(gòu)并列。原句違反這一原則,破壞了句子成分的和諧和句式的優(yōu)美對稱 My mother is a musician。 therefore I have also chosen it as my profession. My mother is a musician。 therefore I have also chosen music as my profession. 代詞起連接語篇的作用,它能體現(xiàn)句子之間的邏輯聯(lián)系,上面句中 it 指代不明,模棱兩可。 After eating our lunch, the driver called us to the bus. After eating our lunch, we were called to the bus by the driver. 此句非謂語動詞的邏輯主語與主語不一致。這顯然不是作者的原意,改正后的句子就清楚多了。 The basketball players were disappointed, caused by the sudden change of weather. The basketball players were disappointed because the weather suddenly changed. 此句 caused引出的分詞短語與前半句沒有意義聯(lián)系,導(dǎo)致短語失去修飾對象而呈游離或垂懸狀態(tài),從而破壞了整個句子的邏輯連貫性。 5.強(qiáng)勢性( Emphasis) 倒裝法。 把應(yīng)強(qiáng)調(diào)的成分提至句首,使之突出。如: Gone are the days when my heart was young and gay. Fro