【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty. 【 優(yōu)化 】 Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, though they feel a little guilty sometimes. 微信號： everyday46 , 獲取更多英語好資料！ 微博： @每日四六級英語 【 例 4】 【 原文 】 When I turned right on the corner, a motorbike knocked into a small car. The motorbike was red. There were two persons on the motorbike. The car was yellow. The motorbike fell down. The two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured. The driver came out of the car at once, and asked about the two persons’ injuries. As soon as I saw that, I made a telephone call to 110. The traffic police arrived in a short time. 【 優(yōu)化 】 When I turned right on the corner, a red motorbike with two persons knocked into a small yellow car. Immediately, the motorbike fell down, and the two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured. At that time, the car driver came out of the car, and asked about the two persons’ injuries. Seeing this, I dialed the 110. In a short time, the traffic police arrived. 微信號： everyday46 , 獲取更多英語好資料！ 微博： @每日四六級英語 2. 長句變短句 長句固然能表達(dá)出復(fù)雜而縝密的思想，但如果片面追求復(fù)雜句子，反而會顯得華而不實，成為表達(dá)的累贅。寫作中句子的長短應(yīng)根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要而定。短句不僅指句子長度較短，也指句子內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)精煉，簡潔是寫作的一個重要原則，用詞累贅則是寫作的大忌。 【 例 1】 【 原文 】 His father, who is a salesman, became a millionaire overnight. 【 優(yōu)化 】 His father, a salesman, became a millionaire overnight. 【 例 2】 【 原文 】 Perhaps they basically distrusted our capacity to judge correctly. 【 優(yōu)化 】 They distrusted our judgment. 微信號： everyday46 , 獲取更多英語好資料！ 微博： @每日四六級英語 一、將下面的長句和短句進(jìn)行優(yōu)化改寫，使其更符合表達(dá)要求。 【 原句 】 【 優(yōu)化 】 The captain, a tall, thin man with a big mustache, was pacing the bridge with a look of importance. The grading system at our college should be abolished, because neither the students nor the instructors like it. 1. The captain was a tall, thin man with a big mustache. He was pacing the bridge with a look of importance. 2. The grading system at our college should be abolished. The students don’t like getting grades. The instructors don’t enjoy giving grades. 微信號： everyday46 , 獲取更多英語好資料！ 微博： @每日四六級英語 【 原文 】 【 優(yōu)化 】 The seriousness of the problem on the reserves of raw materials shows that it is important to set up a plan to conserve and divide up fairly natural resources on a worldwide scale. Those who don’t like having roommates argue that several people living together causes some unpleasantness because every person has his or her own way. 5. Natural resources are very limited. They will be exhausted in the near future. It is not true. But it bees a major concern around the world. This is a widely accepted fact. 4. Some students don’t like having roommates. They think every person has his or her own way. And several people living together causes some unpleasantness. 3. The problem of the reserve of raw materials is being more serious. It shows it is important to begin a plan. We should conserve and divide up the natural resources on a worldwide scale. It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future, though it is unlikely to be true. 微信號： everyday46 , 獲取更多英語好資料！ 微博： @每日四六級英語 二、請按照所給提示對下面的作文進(jìn)行句式優(yōu)化 【 原文 】 【 優(yōu)化 】 ① With the deepening of reform and opening up of our country, studying overseas is being an increasingly popular option. ② People who choose to further their studies abroad insist that if they go to study overseas they can get many benefits in different ways. ③ First, when they live in a foreign country, they can improve their foreign language skills. ④ Second, if they plete part or all of their education overseas, they can gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study. ⑤ Third, they can experience a different culture firsthand. 【 提示 】 將②中的賓語從句改為簡單句，將其中的條件狀語從句改為主語。將③中的時間狀語從句改為現(xiàn)在分詞短語。將④中的條件狀語從句改為主語，該句變?yōu)楹唵尉洹? 【 優(yōu)化 】 With the deepening of reform and opening up of our country, studying overseas is being an increasingly popular option. People who choose to further their studies abroad insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways. First, living in a foreign country, they can improve their foreign languages skills. Second, pleting part or all of their education overseas helps them gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study. Third, they can experience a different culture firsthand. 微信號： everyday46 , 獲取更多英語好資料！ 微博： @每日四六級英語 ⑥ However, there are still many people who favor studying at home. ⑦ They argue that, studying abroad is too expensive and therefore does not pay off and have no language and cultural barriers. 【 提示 】 將⑦改成兩句，分別陳述兩個理由。 ⑧ As for me, I believe both opinions are acceptable in some sense. ⑨ If students who wish to have overseas academic experience have got the chances and financial resources, they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision, while if conditions don’t permit them to go abroad, they can pursue their studies at top universities in our country. ⑩ The place where they study is not very important for them, and instead, it is what they can learn that is the most important. 【 提示 】 將⑨改成兩句，分別陳述兩種不同的情況。通過 not…but 將⑩簡化成一個簡單句。 【 優(yōu)化 】 However, there are still many people who favor studying at home. They argue that, studying abroad is too expensive and therefore does not pay off. What’s more, there are no language and cultural barriers when studying in our country