【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采取郵件格式，時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)為主。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。句型：not only…but also；You39。d better …；I39。m looking forward to…。3．假如你即將在學(xué)校英語興趣小組的活動(dòng)中發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。要點(diǎn)提示如下:（1）幾個(gè)月前，奶奶晚飯后去跳廣場舞（do square dancing）。（2）從那時(shí)起，奶奶喜歡上了廣場舞。（3）現(xiàn)在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4）有些鄰居有意見，認(rèn)為音樂很吵，無法入睡。（5）你認(rèn)為人們可以跳廣場舞，但……要求：（1）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（2）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a plaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇學(xué)校英語興趣小組的活動(dòng)中的發(fā)言稿。要注意隨著文章推進(jìn)時(shí)態(tài)的變化，一開始應(yīng)該選擇一般過去時(shí)，而后面應(yīng)該選用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，最后表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致關(guān)系，構(gòu)思文章框架，列舉出可能會(huì)用到的好詞好句，記住千萬不能漏寫信息要點(diǎn)。參考詞匯就是必用詞匯，一定要運(yùn)用到文章當(dāng)中。在寫作中注意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使文章更加順暢，自然。4．假設(shè)你是來自中國的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個(gè)網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。內(nèi)容包括：；(包含冬令營的時(shí)間,聽Liz Payne的講座)；。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個(gè)留言。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫留言的目的，包括冬令營的時(shí)間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座；最后簡單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱I來敘述，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。注意英語句子的表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語言的地道。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。穿插一些高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望；最后是一個(gè)簡單的結(jié)尾。如果分段敘述效果則會(huì)更好，那樣會(huì)使文章的層次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，謂語動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā)，語法規(guī)范，符合英語句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級(jí)的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。5．書面表達(dá)86. 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，寫一篇展望2060年的短文。某些人可能到月球上去度假：某些科學(xué)家可能在海底生活。每家都有可視電話（vidcophones），孩子可在家通過電視和廣播學(xué)習(xí)，接受教育，機(jī)器人為你做家務(wù)……要求：短文必須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，同學(xué)們可以展開想象，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)：90調(diào)左右。（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總調(diào)數(shù)）。The life in2060Sometimes I dream about life in 2060. What will it______________________________________________Keys：【答案】The life in 2060Sometimes I dream about life in 2060. What will it be like？Perhaps some people will go to the moon for a