英語(yǔ)初中祈使句講解及練習(xí)(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. They think fireworks produce so much smoke that it can cause serious air pollution. What’s more, people like letting them off at midnight, it is always so noisy outside that many people can’t sleep well. Also, it may cause big fire if people aren’t careful enough. Some children like playing with fireworks, so it’s dangerous for their eyes. If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere.On the other hand, some students don’t agree. They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. Moreover, Chinese traditional culture is missing. We should protect it. People will feel less interested than before without fireworks.I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else. Protecting environment is protecting ourselves.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。常州市政府發(fā)文，從2019年2月1日起，市區(qū)禁止燃放煙花爆竹。你們班級(jí)的同學(xué)們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信介紹大家的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)和第一人稱(chēng)。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)主題和所給要點(diǎn)列出提綱，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。盡量使用高分句型。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫(xiě)作提綱。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱： 大多數(shù)學(xué)生不同意在春節(jié)放煙花。他們認(rèn)為煙花產(chǎn)生的煙太多，會(huì)造成嚴(yán)重的空氣污染。更重要的是，人們喜歡在午夜放假，外面總是那么吵，很多人睡不好覺(jué)。另外，如果人們不夠小心，可能會(huì)引起大火。有些孩子喜歡玩煙花，這對(duì)他們的眼睛很危險(xiǎn)。如果我們不放煙花，清潔工就不需要到處清理那么多垃圾。 另一方面，有些學(xué)生不同意。他們認(rèn)為中國(guó)人幾百年前就習(xí)慣放煙花了。此外，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化也缺失了。我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)它。如果沒(méi)有煙花，人們會(huì)比以前更不感興趣。 我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該遵守這條規(guī)則，因?yàn)榱己玫沫h(huán)境比其他任何東西都重要。保護(hù)環(huán)境就是保護(hù)我們自己。【點(diǎn)睛】本文思路清晰，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，層次分明，所用句式句型比較高級(jí)，像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. / I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else.。書(shū)面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和高分句式，語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用。注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。5．書(shū)面表達(dá)（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫(xiě)作，請(qǐng)將作文寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。為了使生活更美好，社會(huì)需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我們需要他人的幫助，也要學(xué)會(huì)幫助他人。請(qǐng)你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說(shuō)說(shuō)你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會(huì)充滿正能量。作文要求：1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2．語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。 作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫(xiě)在試卷上，也不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵(lì)大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提
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