【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 e are always some people that touch you.My classmate Bai Yang es from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students. She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇人物介紹。人物身份為同學(xué)白楊，介紹分四個(gè)要點(diǎn)：她家境貧寒；她精心照顧患病母親；她學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，成績(jī)優(yōu)異；她關(guān)心同學(xué)，樂(lè)于助人；她經(jīng)常利用空閑時(shí)間做志愿者工作。人稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意語(yǔ)法正確，善用連詞，使各個(gè)要點(diǎn)連貫?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎he takes good care of her mother who has a serious 。who has a serious illness為定語(yǔ)從句?！靖叻志湫投縉o matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life ，她仍然笑對(duì)生活。No matter how hard the life is為讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。8．（哈爾濱市第四十七中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是麗麗，還有不到100天就要中考了，今天為了讓我你們?cè)诰o張的學(xué)習(xí)之余得到放松，你們班召開(kāi)了一個(gè)主題為業(yè)余時(shí)間你最喜歡做什么的討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇日記，并談一下業(yè)余時(shí)間做運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)你的好處。 寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)： 1. 現(xiàn)在的狀態(tài)：為了中考努力學(xué)習(xí)。 2. 討論的結(jié)果。 （1）百分之四十的學(xué)生業(yè)余時(shí)間喜歡聽(tīng)音樂(lè)。 （2）百分之三十的學(xué)生喜歡業(yè)余時(shí)間打電腦游戲（3） 你和一些同學(xué)喜歡做運(yùn)動(dòng)。 寫(xiě)作要求： 。 2. 可適當(dāng)加人細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。 、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。 。 Dear Diary, Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. _________________【答案】Dear Diary,Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. Now we are studying for the senior high school entrance examination. Today we had a discussion about what do you like during the spare time.40% of the students are fond of listening to music. They strongly believe that it is a good way to make them relaxed. 30% of the students prefer playing puter games. As far as they’re concerned, playing puter games makes them more energetic.As for some students and me, we like doing exercise. Doing exercise is important for us to keep healthy. If we are healthy, we’ll have more chances to get good grades.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述同學(xué)們業(yè)余時(shí)間喜歡做的活動(dòng)以及運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如spare time, be fond of, strongly believe, make sb adj, as far as one’s concerned, keep healthy, have chances to do以及“主將從現(xiàn)”原則。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（江蘇揚(yáng)州教育學(xué)院附中中考模擬）你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【答案】例文Dear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定句子人稱，時(shí)態(tài)等問(wèn)題?？梢韵劝迅饕c(diǎn)用句子表達(dá)出來(lái)，然后再組合成文。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，為了使短文更顯得有邏輯性，在列舉自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)時(shí)，可以適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞。舉出的例子要有說(shuō)服力，想象合理并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意采用一些習(xí)慣的句式，固定短語(yǔ)，以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫(xiě)完后多讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the 。10．（安徽省蚌埠龍湖中學(xué)中考模擬）當(dāng)前，我市各學(xué)校正在開(kāi)展“好書(shū)伴我成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)活動(dòng)主題并結(jié)合表格信息，以“Growing up with Good books”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約80個(gè)單詞的倡議書(shū)，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書(shū)的益處獲取知識(shí)、開(kāi)闊視野、使人快樂(lè) 存在的現(xiàn)象聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占用了大部分業(yè)余時(shí)間發(fā)出倡議多讀書(shū)，讀經(jīng)典好書(shū)。讓讀書(shū)成為我們生活的一部分。要求：；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；。Growing up with Good booksMy dear friend,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Dear Friends,Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will bee.However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest th