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antages.First,both boys and girls can take part in it.Second,it helps develop team spirit.What’s more,playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan.Messi is my hero.He has a gift for playing football.My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi.I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題要求按提綱的提示,介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。要求仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確本文主要從三個(gè)方面來(lái)寫(xiě):介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)及其好處;說(shuō)說(shuō)自己的偶像;談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài);語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):本文語(yǔ)言精煉,像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子,簡(jiǎn)潔,但是句意表達(dá)清楚;同時(shí),本文用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)、不定式作表語(yǔ)等等語(yǔ)法形式,使表達(dá)生動(dòng);用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。4. 為提升南京城市形象,我市已啟動(dòng)老小區(qū)出新改造工程。假設(shè)你是 Tim,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容的提示,用英文向你的外國(guó)筆友 Jack 做簡(jiǎn)單的介紹。Purposeimprove the environmentChanges to people?s lifebeautiful buildings, …Problemslots of noise, rubbishYour advice…注意:;,意思連貫,條理清楚,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;3 詞數(shù) 80 左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old munities can do what they can do to renovate our munities.【解析】【分析】這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是描述老社區(qū)改造工程,話(huà)題較新。【詳解】這是篇材料作文,所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給的比較零碎,不完整,所以考生需要結(jié)合實(shí)際情況補(bǔ)充完整,是文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型,在能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。5.書(shū)面表達(dá)我們?cè)谏钪锌偸敲鎸?duì)著各種各樣的壓力,這會(huì)嚴(yán)重妨礙我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)正開(kāi)辟專(zhuān)欄討論中學(xué)生如何減壓。假設(shè)你叫李華,請(qǐng)從以下幾個(gè)方面,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)出你的具體做法,向該欄目投稿。;;;。參考詞匯:stressed 注意:;;,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves. Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax for I feel stressed,I usually municate with my friends,parents or I will do sports with my classmates,such as riding bikes,going swimming and so go to the movies or list