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much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。5.人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文,介紹人們不同的觀點(diǎn),并表達(dá)自己的看法。贊成的理由反對(duì)的理由你的看法1. 廣交朋友2. 可自由表達(dá)思想3. 有利于外語學(xué)習(xí)1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2. 影響學(xué)習(xí)3. 可能上當(dāng)受騙(be cheated)1. ...2. ...注意:1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表中各方觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行合理拓展。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右,短文的開頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文,第一段要寫贊同學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點(diǎn),第二段要寫反對(duì)學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點(diǎn),第三段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)?!驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見,寫作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示,確定文章中心。注意文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。文章要有層次、流暢。可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系,要符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,可以分三段寫:贊成;反對(duì);你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。6.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下列表格的提示,寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文.(80詞左右)文章內(nèi)容必須包含所給的所有信息.開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):過去現(xiàn)在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈(clean and clear).3步行、騎自行車上班3乘公交車、小汽車上班4道路狹窄(narrow).4街道寬闊(wide),干凈整潔5居住條件(livingconditions)差5生活越來越好,環(huán)境(environment)越來越舒適.6你的感想…(寫兩到三句)Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years,great changes have taken place in our hometown. 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如take place,in our hometown,in the past,used to be,go to do,on foot,by bike,better and better,more and more等。而I think it39。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)?!军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。7.書面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己心愛的物品,相信你也擁有一個(gè)自己心愛的物品吧!請(qǐng)以“A(n) _____ I have”為題,描述一個(gè)或一件你心