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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on. What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關霧霾的情況,題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容,我們應將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息,不能遺漏要點,并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱,通過分析可知,這篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),謂語動詞用原形,特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化,這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習慣,英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。應從句子整體考慮,使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達,語法規(guī)范。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語,增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。6.近來,美國總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國朋友Sam 看過相關報道之后也很想學好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明,請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關于如何學好漢語的建議。要點提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學們用中文交流。、報紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信,告訴他如何學好漢語,題目中從四個方面提出了建議。通過審題可知,這是要求寫一封建議信,內(nèi)容應包括以下幾個方面:首先應和Sam先做一個交流,然后引出寫信的目的;接下來給出具體的建議,依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條,用正確的英語表達出來,還應注意補充一些內(nèi)容,使文章更加充實;最后寫一個適當?shù)慕Y尾,如希望建議對你有幫助等。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時,根據(jù)表達需要使用恰當?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同,不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。應從句子的整體結構考慮,寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結構或主系表結構為主,簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。為提升文章檔次,可以穿插使用并列句或復合句以及其他一些復雜句式。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分,使文章意思連貫,表達流暢?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信,對他的漢語學習提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個部分:第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學習漢語這一話題,并介紹寫信的目的;第二段中是提出的具體的建議,這是這篇文章的主體,所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First,Second,Thir