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賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式,如Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。5.假如你叫李華,最近你班里的美國(guó)交換生Lucy想要感受中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父母商議后,打算邀請(qǐng)她去老舍茶館。你通過(guò)微信告知她:要去哪,在那要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。提示詞語(yǔ):Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問(wèn)題:Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,我通過(guò)微信告訴Lucy要去哪,在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí),人稱為第一人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I want to……,We are going to……,We can……,Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想要邀請(qǐng)你去老舍茶館,接下來(lái)介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?,最后指出我們要在何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。6.環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé), 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛(ài)美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源,相信我們的家園會(huì)越來(lái)越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望。提示詞語(yǔ): pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問(wèn)題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作,寫(xiě)作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來(lái)敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述建議時(shí),描寫(xiě)具體,條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。句型:When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。以及狀語(yǔ)從句等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫(xiě)是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7.隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變, 購(gòu)物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。“網(wǎng)購(gòu)”已成為一種時(shí)尚,越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體中。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示,寫(xiě)一篇網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage);節(jié)約時(shí)間;避免擁擠、勞累,品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage), 看不到商品本身, 造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)……提示詞匯:網(wǎng)購(gòu)shopping online。 商品 goods。 導(dǎo)致 cause注意:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;;:100詞左右,文章開(kāi)頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping onli