【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 和復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。5． 書面表達(dá)請將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。一直以來，同學(xué)們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點。在你班的主題班會上，同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表你的觀點。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；Make us less interested in studying；...Your opinion：要求：1．80詞以上。2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名?！敬鸢浮緿ear students，I39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析：審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文，討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點，其次結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表自己的觀點。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確，注意正確使用連詞，借助實例、實際經(jīng)驗來佐證自己的觀點。寫作亮點：首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題，表達(dá)出自己的觀點（認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。其次，開始具體陳述觀點，陳述的時候要適當(dāng)使用實例，相關(guān)用到的短語有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時候有困難，review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識，think over the difficulties來回思考難點，Little by little一點一點地。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。最后可以用說理的方式來介紹做作業(yè)的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能，在這里也有一點亮點，就是說作業(yè)也要有變化性，要豐富多彩，體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考，總體來說出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。6．書面表達(dá)（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。為了使生活更美好，社會需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我們需要他人的幫助，也要學(xué)會幫助他人。請你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量。作文要求：1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名。2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。 作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫在試卷上，也不計入總詞數(shù)。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a