【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 lp of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．　　近年來霧霾天氣在中國(guó)許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向?？坝⒄Z角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2個(gè)） 3. 應(yīng)對(duì)霧霾的措施（3個(gè)）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意：1. 詞數(shù)110左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. 　　How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá)，語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。6．書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報(bào)“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn) 寫一封信，說說你的計(jì)劃?；顒?dòng)畢業(yè)晚會(huì)時(shí)間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.邀請(qǐng)校長(zhǎng)作演講；2.互贈(zèng)禮物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫。 ，語法正確，書寫整潔。 ，開頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________