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ng ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示,但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外,還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。:例文采用三段式;用第一人稱來敘述講成語故事活動(dòng);因?yàn)榛顒?dòng)已經(jīng)舉辦,所以時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí);對(duì)參加活動(dòng)的過程描寫完整且條理清晰。:短語:in order to,take part in,lots of,learn from,in the process of,What’s more,have a good time。句型:被動(dòng)句型。5.假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去北京世園會(huì)參觀。你打算邀請(qǐng)外教 Peter參加。請(qǐng)用英語寫一封電子郵件,告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn),在那里可以做什么,以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語: school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題: ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀:這是一篇給材料作文,屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向,然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng):文章采取郵件格式,時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)為主。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),語言準(zhǔn)確,語意連貫,表達(dá)清楚,具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點(diǎn):短語:school gate;invite sb. to do;a lot of;plan to do。句型:not only…but also;You39。d better …;I39。m looking forward to…。6.為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動(dòng)來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一個(gè)選題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容提示:1. 楊時(shí)去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時(shí)在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時(shí)在門口2. 通過介紹這個(gè)故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點(diǎn)。要求:1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫:詞數(shù):100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實(shí)姓名?!敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”。目的是宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí),靈活運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息,通過介紹這個(gè)故事,發(fā)表看法或者觀點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí),避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題,例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,具有條理性。7.書面表達(dá)4月28日,國家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席2019年中國北京世界園藝博覽會(huì)開幕式,提出綠色發(fā)展“五個(gè)追求”(fivepoint initiative on green development),為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻(xiàn)中國智慧。作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生, 如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”(Live Green, Live Better)? 請(qǐng)以此為題,參考以下要點(diǎn)(可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮), 為??庇⒄Z角”寫一篇100詞左右的英文稿件。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然,如:綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然,如:讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與,從身邊小事做起,如:適度節(jié)約,拒絕浪費(fèi)……;