【正文】 【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給我的英國同學(xué)Simon給寫一封電子郵件，介紹我在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。m interested in your life in Suzhou. Would you please tell me the following information?Is everything OK with the school you study in?What are your English classes like?Is there anything interesting in Suzhou?Do you enjoy your life in Suzhou? Why or why not?Looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishesYours,Simon注意：。注意表達的順序。下午4點，我們離開青龍寺，下午6點回到家。本文提綱：上周末我和幾個同學(xué)去了青龍寺。西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬）假如你是李華，上周末你和幾個同學(xué)一起去了青龍寺（Qing Long Temple）游玩，請根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇游記，介紹一下你愉快的周末?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇演講稿。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。黑龍江中考模擬）假如你是 Lin lei，與朋友Mary約好一起去歷史博物館，但因故不能赴約。我還有其他本領(lǐng)……參考詞匯:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient要求:1. 參考提示, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語句涌順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實信息；Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I39。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。他們說（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句）……注意： （1）. 要求語句通順，意思連貫。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個曾經(jīng)激勵過你的人。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。3．（寫作要求：詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，不得透露姓名等個人信息。而固定句型It is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容；同時First of all,/ Secondly,/ Thirdly,和Finally,等詞使表達條理，層次清晰，是本文的亮點。合肥市第四十二中學(xué)中考模擬）每個人的生命只有一次。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。其次點明綠色生活的重要性。（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。請以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文，向校報的英語園地投稿。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主來敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語動詞形式的變化。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個人是誰，第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質(zhì)以及對自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。要點如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學(xué)得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等?！驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文。主要從表示歉意；說明原因；另約時間這三個方面去介紹?！靖叻志湫投縄f it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. 如果方便的話，我們8:30在校門外見面。1） 關(guān)閉工廠，不亂扔垃圾。s time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don39。9．（短文應(yīng)由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。時態(tài)主要是一般過去時，注意表達的順序。在公共汽車上我們談笑風(fēng)生，我們很高興。考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（、校名等相關(guān)信息。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。我們的國家主席習(xí)近平多次強調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。主題Let’s build a green city together具體做法方式益處、徒步出行避免交通擁堵，減少空氣污染，不隨地吐痰讓城市變得干凈舒適美化城市，保護環(huán)境你的建議聯(lián)系自己的生活實際提出幾條具體的合理的建議。高分句型二：In my daily life，I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. 在我的日常生活中，無論我走到哪里，我會撿垃圾，把垃圾放進垃圾箱里。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個人為保護環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。16．（17．（在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中