【正文】 ）. 你的父母對你嚴(yán)格要求，但是也很關(guān)心你。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯。2. 語言流暢，字跡清楚。Many historical plays have been on TV 【答案】Many historical plays have been on TV recently. Some people like watching historical TV plays to know about history. They think they are interesting and easy 10 understand. Both the old and the young will have a lot of fun watching them.Some other people think another way to learn about history is to read books on history. They believe books can tell them the true stories. They can learn and think a lot from them while reading.I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed and save me much time.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹人們通過什么方式來了解歷史。最后呼吁大家一起努力。2．（【答案】How to Protect Our LivesIt is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our lives.First of all, we should obey the traffic rules and pay attention to traffic safety.Secondly, we should not chase and fight in school. Don39。t climb trees, don39。遼寧中考模擬）（B）按要求完成大作文（80詞左右）節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從我們身邊的小事做起?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先正確理解作文題目，不要偏題，本文是關(guān)于綠色生活，它的重要性，以及你在日常生活中是如何踐行綠色生活的。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)?！敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。（舉例說明，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂意幫助你們。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。下圖是關(guān)于這個音樂機(jī)器人的廣告, 請你根據(jù)所提供的信息寫一份發(fā)言稿。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。四川雅安中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。4） 回收利用廢品等。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等詞語的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。請以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。或使用祈使句、非謂語動詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。中午我們在山腳下野餐。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語或句型。To: maxbritainFrom: simonbritainSubject: Life in SuzhouDear Max,How are you? I haven39。t written to you till now. I will send you some photos next time. Take care!YoursMax【答案】Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。開頭為自己沒有回信而感到抱歉，接下來介紹我在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況，最后告知下次給他寄一些照片。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。構(gòu)思提綱。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。全國中考模擬）書面表達(dá)越來越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時也帶來了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。15．（文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。請以“初中生活的最后一刻”作為寫一篇應(yīng)該約120字的文章。內(nèi)容如下：1. 說明是否存在學(xué)習(xí)效率不高的現(xiàn)象；2. 分析自己或他人效率不高的原因，并舉例說明；3. 根據(jù)你所列出的原因，提出相應(yīng)的建議。18．（為了創(chuàng)建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市團(tuán)委正在開展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時應(yīng)該從以下幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。How to improve learning efficiencyIn my class, _______________________________________________________________【答案】How to improve learning efficiencyIn my class, some of my classmates have asked me how to study better. They often say, “why aren’t my grades improving even after I study harder?” In my opinion, it has to do with learning efficiency.First, some students spend a lot of time on other things, including puter games and TV programs. Although they always finish their homework on time, they don’t do it carefully. Second, some students stay up late studying. They might only have five hours left for sleeping. Because they’re so sleepy, they can’t pay their full attention in class. How can they improve if they don’t get enough sleep?My suggestion is that students should use their time wisely. If you cannot control yourself, you’d better ask your teachers or parents for help. They can help you make a plan. If you follow the suggestion and take action, I believe your learning efficiency will be greatly improved.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。寫作的時候可以分為三個部分，第一段介紹自己的感受，第二段講對某人的感謝及其原因，最后一段寫一個小片段，寫寫自己想感謝的人。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。基本情況張陽，陽光中學(xué)九年級二班學(xué)生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文, 介紹作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)該怎么做，結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的應(yīng)用。別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采。13．（通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。12．（t written to you till am really busy with the course and making new friends these here are kind and friendly .I am getting on well with them.My school starts at 8 finishes at 4: school,we can do some sports to classes in China are not live ones in texts are easy.Suzhou is a beautiful ’s famous for its pretty ’s lots of delicious local food enjoy my life in Suzhou because I can experience a lot here. I will send you some photos next time. Take care!YoursMax