【正文】 對自己不滿意。他們希望你們實現(xiàn)自己的理想。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。我是能聽會說的小音樂機(jī)器人,只要你對我說歌曲的名字, 我就能唱給你聽?！驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文。7．（主要從表示歉意；說明原因；另約時間這三個方面去介紹。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題?！靖叻志湫投縄f it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. 如果方便的話，我們8:30在校門外見面。假如你們學(xué)校要開展主題為：“如何保護(hù)地球”的演講比賽。1） 關(guān)閉工廠，不亂扔垃圾。要求： ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。s time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don39。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。9．（要求:。短文應(yīng)由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。10．（時態(tài)主要是一般過去時，注意表達(dá)的順序。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。在公共汽車上我們談笑風(fēng)生，我們很高興。下午我們?nèi)ヅ郎??？忌荒苓z漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。（3）切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。11．（t heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou. I39。、校名等相關(guān)信息。m sorry I haven39。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。此處be busy with, get on well with, be famous for, send sb sth, next time, take care等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。我們的國家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個溫情的中國家庭?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。主題Let’s build a green city together具體做法方式益處、徒步出行避免交通擁堵，減少空氣污染，不隨地吐痰讓城市變得干凈舒適美化城市，保護(hù)環(huán)境你的建議聯(lián)系自己的生活實際提出幾條具體的合理的建議。動筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充兩條個人的觀點。高分句型二：In my daily life，I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. 在我的日常生活中，無論我走到哪里，我會撿垃圾，把垃圾放進(jìn)垃圾箱里。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？請寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（100字左右）內(nèi)容提示：遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過斑馬線。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。靖江外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個人為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。16．（需要包括的要點有：；，至少要寫兩條原因；，要有細(xì)節(jié)，說出時間、地點、人物以及具體發(fā)生的事件。17．（參考詞匯：效率 efficiency注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。江蘇中考模擬）書