【正文】 江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。參考詞匯：效率 efficiency注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；2. 語(yǔ)言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。需要包括的要點(diǎn)有：；，至少要寫(xiě)兩條原因；，要有細(xì)節(jié)，說(shuō)出時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物以及具體發(fā)生的事件。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。靖江外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇介紹我的朋友張陽(yáng)的短文。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（100字左右）內(nèi)容提示：遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過(guò)斑馬線(xiàn)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。此處be busy with, get on well with, be famous for, send sb sth, next time, take care等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。m sorry I haven39。t heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou. I39。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。下午我們?nèi)ヅ郎健?xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。10．（語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。要求:。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。要求： ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。假如你們學(xué)校要開(kāi)展主題為：“如何保護(hù)地球”的演講比賽。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。7．（我是能聽(tīng)會(huì)說(shuō)的小音樂(lè)機(jī)器人,只要你對(duì)我說(shuō)歌曲的名字, 我就能唱給你聽(tīng)。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。他們希望你們實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39?？梢院?jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。其次，在語(yǔ)句正確的基礎(chǔ)上，多運(yùn)用連詞，使文章升華，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章更上一檔次。假設(shè)你是一個(gè)注重“低碳”生活的中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)以“My Green Life”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)劇熬G色生活”的重要性，以及你所倡導(dǎo)的“綠色生活”方式。t play dangerous games.Thirdly, we should eat some healthy foods, such as vegetables, fruits, and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body.Finally, a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better life.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如how to do，first of all，obey the traffic rules，pay attention to，such as，and so on，be able to，learn to do等。請(qǐng)你以“How to Protect Our Lives”為題，從安全和健康的角度入手，寫(xiě)一篇如何珍惜和保護(hù)我們生命的短文，要點(diǎn)如下：1. 交通安全，校園安全2. 健康的飲食和生活3. ... ...參考詞匯：treasure（v.）珍惜注意：1. 詞數(shù)80~100；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。然后說(shuō)我在日常生活中對(duì)綠色出行作出的貢獻(xiàn)，騎自行車(chē)，出門(mén)關(guān)燈等。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要點(diǎn)： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。你認(rèn)為自己學(xué)習(xí)上還要多花工夫。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話(huà)題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。6．（內(nèi)容上首先要介紹這個(gè)音樂(lè)機(jī)器人，其次表達(dá)為什么“我”要介紹這個(gè)機(jī)器人，也就是對(duì)它的喜愛(ài)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。If it’s convenient for you是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。 2） 節(jié)約用水、用電的方法。t litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.I hope our home will bee better and better.Thanks for listening!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It39。河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開(kāi)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見(jiàn)、易于把握的簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。其次短文里使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱(chēng)敘述，注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，所給提示就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。上午9點(diǎn)我們到了那里。要學(xué)以致用。江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是在蘇州學(xué)習(xí)的英國(guó)交流學(xué)生Max，你的英國(guó)同學(xué)Simon給你寫(xiě)了一封電子郵件，想了解你在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。假