【正文】 learn a 評(píng)： 亮點(diǎn)：段落清楚，要點(diǎn)齊全，句式表達(dá)比較靈活，能適當(dāng)運(yùn)用復(fù)句。3〃我認(rèn)為，……Where to live —in the City or in the Country Some people like living in the city because city life has many think there are more job opportunities in cities, life there is more colorful and meaningful than that in the country, and there are more modern conveniences in cities for people to some other people prefer to live in the say life in the countryside is closer to nature and better for their health, life there is quieter and that country people are more honest than city would like to live in a city when I am young to earn enough money and I live in the countryside when I am old for having a quite ： 你叫李平，是英語(yǔ)系學(xué)生會(huì)主席。你的朋友 Bonnie 很快就要到你的鄉(xiāng)間小屋拜訪(fǎng)，但你卻要出去一會(huì)兒。2〃騎自行車(chē)有許多好處。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫(xiě)一篇有“英語(yǔ)味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。要求觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，緊湊連貫 學(xué)生作品1：Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly are some reasons one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in not only spare no effort to teach the students, but also give classes will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching goodteachers!For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching is also the most important, especially for us senior is only my think young teachers are also 評(píng)：亮點(diǎn)：觀點(diǎn)鮮明，詞匯句型的運(yùn)用比較靈活過(guò)渡詞及連詞的使用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連貫、條理清楚。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。 did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) hope I can pay a visit to you next year.（強(qiáng)調(diào)） was puzzled.（感嘆） is great fun to climb the hill.（感嘆） and Mary like singing songs.（肯定倒裝） likes to study and play.（否定倒裝） I’m weak, I’ll make the effort.(使用倒裝句) his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句） the firefighters came.（表時(shí)間句型） recent years, Beijing has been advancing very these make people’s lives convenient, pleasant and the development of ______________________ __________________________________________________ ___ that________ ______________________________________________ Translate the sentences:我校是一所市重點(diǎn)中學(xué)，位于樂(lè)陵西郊。，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。字?jǐn)?shù)100個(gè)左右。Yao Ming was walking in the street___________ he heard someone cry for 、He advised that I hire a car ___________ I could travel around in the 、It was not long___________the police 、___________he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the 、Do you agree with my arrangement ? ___________,do write to me 、We can go downtown and do some , we can pay a visit to some places of 、I shared the cost of the gas with my , I saved $、Eating sugar is bad for our , it may make us : Writing Practice請(qǐng)你給《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》寫(xiě)一篇稿件，談?wù)勣r(nóng)村兒童失學(xué)的主要原因及你的看法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。第三篇：2011高考英語(yǔ)作文備考教案課前預(yù)習(xí)案?jìng)鋺?zhàn)2014高考英語(yǔ)作文Ⅰ.NMET書(shū)面表達(dá)第五項(xiàng)要求。但是句子不要寫(xiě)的太長(zhǎng)，一層套一層也不好，最多兩層就行。這句話(huà)中肯定“收”那個(gè)動(dòng)作很多同學(xué)不會(huì)表達(dá)，那能不能想一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)義的方式，既避開(kāi)了“收”這個(gè)動(dòng)作還能表達(dá)原句的含義。(2)怎樣去避開(kāi)不會(huì)的表達(dá)，轉(zhuǎn)義。我們應(yīng)該把重心放在句型上，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)最容易把握。第一篇：高考備考：如何寫(xiě)好英語(yǔ)作文（范文模版）高考備考：如何寫(xiě)好英語(yǔ)作文高考寫(xiě)作的實(shí)質(zhì)——變相的考察句型與詞匯的靈活應(yīng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作不同于語(yǔ)文作文的寫(xiě)作，如果說(shuō)語(yǔ)文作文是一個(gè)自由發(fā)揮的舞蹈，那么高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作就是帶著枷鎖在跳舞。但是大家又有這樣的困惑，學(xué)校里老師也給了我們很多的句型啊，動(dòng)輒成五十上一百句的，大家背的挺多，但是面對(duì)考試的時(shí)候，發(fā)現(xiàn)背的那些怎么也用不上。例如：這本書(shū)是如此的有趣，以致于我讀了一遍又一遍。A wall and a gate have to be built if there is an entrance fee, which doesn39。第一段必須點(diǎn)題。，印象不好也會(huì)降檔。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。原因：家庭貧窮，供不起兒童上學(xué)，他們不得不在家賺錢(qián)養(yǎng)家。Now in the country areas, there are many children out of families are poor and can’t afford their have to stay at home and make parents think daughters needn’t go to don’t let them go to children are not interested in their studies and wouldn’t like to go to the children including girls should be whole society should pay attention to ’ll play an important part in the future of our ：[優(yōu)點(diǎn)]詞能達(dá)意；語(yǔ)句表達(dá)基本正確。，他回家了。校園很美,綠樹(shù)成蔭。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。不足之處：個(gè)別地方的表達(dá)需要改進(jìn)。運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝。3〃自行車(chē)的未來(lái)……The Bicycle in China The bicycle is the most popular means of transportation in is a country “on bicycle wheels”.People ride them for various purposes such as going to and from school and are very cheap and easy to buy in are many advantages to riding a , using a bicycle can greatly help reduce the air pollution in many big , people can improve their health by riding a future of bicycle will be some European countries, city governments have