基礎(chǔ)寫作專題1記敘文型基礎(chǔ)寫作(完整版)
【正文】 )； (Variety)。 考生要了解復(fù)雜句的概念、學(xué)會使用復(fù)雜句來表達信息要點，盡量避免一些受漢語思維影響而犯的書面表達錯誤。此題型基本不要求考生對寫作內(nèi)容進行發(fā)揮，只需將所給信息完整、準確、連貫地寫出就可以了。 Dear Peter， I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new _______________________________ ________________________________________________________________________. Wele to our school if you have any chance. Yours， Li Hua 第五模塊 │ 題型探究 【 學(xué)生樣本 】 Dear Peter， I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.① In order to make our school beautiful and clean the air, we plan to have more trees in our school now.② In order to get good places to study and live, we have many plans.③ First, we plan to build a botanical garden and let students visit and use.④ Second, we plan to build up a small garden for people to rest and study.⑤At last, we plan to build some statues of famous people to effect students and teachers. Wele to our school if you have any chance. Yours， Li Hua 第五模塊 │ 題型探究 【 評論點撥 】 我們來看看學(xué)生的樣本有什么地方可以改進： 第①句：“ In order to make our school beautiful and clean the air ”比較生硬， to make our school beautiful應(yīng)該改為 to make our school more beautiful；“ we plan to have more trees in our school now”中的have改為 plant會好些。 第五模塊 │ 題型探究 【參考范文】 Dear Peter， I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresher, and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live to the program, we will plant different kinds of trees, flowers and grass in and around our botanical garden will_be_built_for us to visit and practice , we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a ’s more, 第五模塊 │ 題型探究 some_statues_of_famous_people_will_be_set_up to encourage us to work harder. Wele to our school if you have any chance. Yours， Li Hua 【 注 】 由于主語靈活變動， 使文章讀起來擺脫了呆板， 行文有了生氣。 第五模塊 │ 題型探究 第 3句運用名詞化
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