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); (Variety)。 考生要了解復(fù)雜句的概念、學(xué)會(huì)使用復(fù)雜句來表達(dá)信息要點(diǎn),盡量避免一些受漢語思維影響而犯的書面表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤。此題型基本不要求考生對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容進(jìn)行發(fā)揮,只需將所給信息完整、準(zhǔn)確、連貫地寫出就可以了。 Dear Peter, I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new _______________________________ ________________________________________________________________________. Wele to our school if you have any chance. Yours, Li Hua 第五模塊 │ 題型探究 【 學(xué)生樣本 】 Dear Peter, I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.① In order to make our school beautiful and clean the air, we plan to have more trees in our school now.② In order to get good places to study and live, we have many plans.③ First, we plan to build a botanical garden and let students visit and use.④ Second, we plan to build up a small garden for people to rest and study.⑤At last, we plan to build some statues of famous people to effect students and teachers. Wele to our school if you have any chance. Yours, Li Hua 第五模塊 │ 題型探究 【 評(píng)論點(diǎn)撥 】 我們來看看學(xué)生的樣本有什么地方可以改進(jìn): 第①句:“ In order to make our school beautiful and clean the air ”比較生硬, to make our school beautiful應(yīng)該改為 to make our school more beautiful;“ we plan to have more trees in our school now”中的have改為 plant會(huì)好些。 第五模塊 │ 題型探究 【參考范文】 Dear Peter, I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresher, and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live to the program, we will plant different kinds of trees, flowers and grass in and around our botanical garden will_be_built_for us to visit and practice , we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a ’s more, 第五模塊 │ 題型探究 some_statues_of_famous_people_will_be_set_up to encourage us to work harder. Wele to our school if you have any chance. Yours, Li Hua 【 注 】 由于主語靈活變動(dòng), 使文章讀起來擺脫了呆板, 行文有了生氣。 第五模塊 │ 題型探究 第 3句運(yùn)用名詞化