【正文】 意表達的準確性，避免不熟悉的表達。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過度自然。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會的活動，并且告訴外教同學們現在喜歡網購圖書并闡述網購圖書的好處。動詞不定式作主語，謂語動詞用單數，疑問詞+to do。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。【點睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹，內容完整，用了表格中的信息。短文開頭：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20．書面表達以下圖畫呈現了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。at 5 o’clock 請你根據博客內容，寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。12．人們對于學生網上交友持不同意見。要求：1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。近日，又至畢業(yè)季，師生們忙著互致臨別贈言。（2）本周五的下午3點，大家將共同交流讀書的體會。 注意：1．短文應包括表中所有內容，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯； 2．不少于80詞。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. 3．書面表達 我校決定讓學生輪流打掃廁所，以此作為教育學生的一種方式。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．中央電視臺《經典詠流傳》節(jié)目的播出，再次激發(fā)了人們對經典文學作品的閱讀熱情。讀書可以成就更美好的自己，讓讀書伴隨我們成長。 這件事在學生中引 起了強烈的反響，請你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料，報告給學校。 生詞提示：respect尊重4．現在智能手機（smartphone）越來越普及，很多中學生都有智能手機。（3）同學們將在下個月網購其他的英文書。為此，編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。 寫作要求： 詞左右，開頭部分已給出，但不計入規(guī)定字數。3. 語言表達準確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。請你用英語寫一篇關于學生網上交友的短文，介紹人們不同的觀點，并表達自己的看法。Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us _____________________________________________15．書面表達“小手拉大手,同做文明人。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點：1. 表明自己的看法。at 4:45請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。2.根據材料可知本文主要是應用第一，三人稱，一般現在時態(tài)和過去時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。4．E解析：例文：The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求根據內容提示，寫一篇英語短文，談一談你對智能手機的看法。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵。6．D解析：Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文?！军c睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。用了because引導的原因狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點。句型：被動句型，現在分詞作狀語，主語從句。寫作亮點：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時候有適當的細節(jié)補充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過去分詞作定語，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時候玩槍的經歷，準確使用了時態(tài)。開頭介紹了我的個人情況，接下來介紹我們的校園，老師和同學，最后對學校、老師、同學表達感謝和祝福。【點睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題，可以分三段寫：贊成；反對；你的看法。s important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。s more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ，豐富了習作內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。【點睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內容，使語言表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。根據材料內容確定主要句子的時態(tài)，及句式等重要內容。做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。12．C解析：Nowadays many teenagers show great in