【正文】 a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。文章要有層次、流暢。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （習(xí)慣于）queuing up （排隊(duì)） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。16．F解析：Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。17．G解析：The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。（多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn)）?！驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見，寫作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，確定文章中心。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的應(yīng)用。短語(yǔ)和固定搭配的正確使用也為這篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（調(diào)整以適應(yīng)…），“as time went by”（隨著時(shí)間的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大進(jìn)步），“keep on learning”（繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)），“In a word”（總而言之）等等短語(yǔ)使用正確。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。亮點(diǎn)句型：（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動(dòng)以來(lái)，在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)激烈的爭(zhēng)論。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。do what we want, such as listening to music大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點(diǎn)左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。；；；；（自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn)）參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守16．（題文） 書面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上，出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定時(shí)做飯、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運(yùn)動(dòng)；3. 處理緊急情況（如：撥打120）假如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者，請(qǐng)你介紹這個(gè)產(chǎn)品，并談?wù)勀愕奈磥?lái)設(shè)想。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語(yǔ)小短文。、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。提示詞語(yǔ)： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問(wèn)題： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua9．寫作某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題為“ A time when I made someone happy”，請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文稿件，內(nèi)容需包括以下要點(diǎn):1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右（題目不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 寫作內(nèi)容：，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。3字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂(lè)部的活動(dòng)情況，并說(shuō)說(shuō)網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書的好處。 不同意：1．很臟，容易使學(xué)生生病。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及地名。常見的英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)常見的英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)及解析一、英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)1．環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。多讀書，讀好書1. 利用閑暇時(shí)間多讀書，養(yǎng)成讀書的好習(xí)慣；2. 多讀經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品……注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。 3．學(xué)會(huì)理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動(dòng)。俱樂(lè)部的同學(xué)們很喜歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。2可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，本次考試后，盼望已久的假期就要到來(lái)！請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，制定出度假計(jì)劃，可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際發(fā)揮。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 8． 假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達(dá)了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬?guó)學(xué)生舉辦的漢語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)的愿望，希望你告知活動(dòng)舉辦的具體時(shí)間地點(diǎn)，活動(dòng)安排以及你的建議。提