【正文】 h their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。10．A解析：A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。t adjust to the weather and life ,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as a result,my English improved a ,I made friends with some of my are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫作分析：這是一篇給定標(biāo)題的材料作文，需要逐條完成要點(diǎn)問題的回答，描述一次自己讓別人開心快樂的經(jīng)歷，是一篇記敘文，首先要讀懂5個問題，其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言和銜接手段把這五個問題的回答聯(lián)系在一起，變成一篇短文，同時也要注意在描述過去的故事的時候要正確運(yùn)用過去時態(tài)。文章條理分明，三個要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。8．D解析：Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動。m sure I39。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。構(gòu)思提綱。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。5．D解析：Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作。（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會。3．A解析：A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求，這是一篇看法類的作文，那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題，然后分別寫出不同人群對此事的看法，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was selfconfident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己讀過的一本書。表述靈活。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。...注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80100；（4）短文開頭僅供參考，不計入總詞數(shù)。...Time to leave schoolActivities to do after school3. 提出至少2條建議。要點(diǎn)包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________18． 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。作為中學(xué)生,我們也做出了自己的努力。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。 。請以 My junior high school life為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。10．書面表達(dá)每個人都有自己心愛的物品，相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧！請以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個或一件你心愛的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。，稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)：。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy6．假設(shè)你是Beth,前段時間曾向英語?？端鸵黄}為My English Te