【正文】 樣專業(yè)外的人士可以了解文章的主要觀點，比較專業(yè)的討論他可以把它當(dāng)成黑箱子，而這一 部份本專業(yè)人士可以進一步研究。2) 段落的整體邏輯經(jīng)常我們要敘述一個問題的幾個方面。減少爭論(arguments).關(guān)于詞匯以及常用結(jié)構(gòu)，要經(jīng)?？偨Y(jié)，多讀多模仿才能融會貫通。通常在敘述了前人成果之后，用However來引導(dǎo)不足，比如However, little information..little attention...little work...little datalittle researchor few studiesfew investigations...few researchers...few attempts... or nonone of these studieshas (have) been lessdone on ...focused onattempted toconductedinvestigatedstudied(with respect to)Previous research (studies, records) has (have)failed to considerignoredmisinterpretedneglected tooverestimated, underestimatedmisleadedthus, these previus results are inconclisive, misleading, unsatisfactory, questionable, controversial..Uncertainties (discrepancies) still exist ...這種引導(dǎo)一般提出一種新方法，或者一種新方向。具體怎么改就不多說了，謙虛謹慎是不可少的。 2. With editor如果在投稿的時候沒有要求選擇編輯，就先到主編那，主編會分派給別的編 輯。總之，每一個步驟都有據(jù)可查，只要整個系統(tǒng)不出問題，就不會有稿件丟失的情況發(fā)生。有的稿件改動一次即可被刊物采納，但也有的要反復(fù)修改多次才能被通過。手續(xù)很簡單，只需向編輯部發(fā)個電子郵件即可或自己上網(wǎng)撤稿。原稿一旦退回作者，文件便會重新回到作者自己在網(wǎng)上的投稿文件夾里，等候修改?？傊?，網(wǎng)上投稿并不難，關(guān)鍵是準備充分，而且在實際上機操作時按部就班，不能單純求快，否則欲速而不達。目前，許多科技期刊網(wǎng)上投稿，需把文件由一種存儲形式轉(zhuǎn)換到另一種存儲形式，比如DOC文件變成PDF文件。比如按要求，原稿不能超過20頁，可有的原稿長達40多頁，甚至更長。如短錄像片(VIDEO CLIP)，動畫片(SHORT CARTOON)等。 網(wǎng)上投稿的關(guān)鍵是要做好充分的準備工作。這種投稿方式顯然比郵寄快得多，但與郵寄一樣，稿件也有丟失的時候。For your guidance, reviewersamp。 Economides amp。(3) 論文讀起來像是XXX的廣告，不知道作者與XXX是否沒有關(guān)聯(lián)。a, an, the39。 It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.未解釋研究方法或解釋不充分。 it is good concept, but need to polish layout, language. s English expert decided to insert the word 39。(2) 寫作質(zhì)量達不到美國學(xué)術(shù)期刊的標準。 Snyder, . J Econ Analysis, 2007).(2) The writing quality is not up to the standard of a US scholarly journal.Reviewer: 31. The author should accentuate his contributions in this manuscript.2. It lacks analytical methodologies to support author’s discoveries.3. Description style material like this manuscript requires structured tables amp。some Figures must be selected from previous literature to discuss also the synthesis of anisotropically shaped Ag nanoparticles (there are several examples published), which has been largely overlooked throughout the paper. 。一旦作者在網(wǎng)上登記注冊投稿，每個主要步驟都有記錄，很受科技期刊作者的歡迎。不同的文章類型，對原稿的格式要求也有所變化。否則，文章在初選階段會很快落選。實際上與網(wǎng)上購物注冊沒太大區(qū)別，關(guān)鍵是要把自己的姓名、單位、聯(lián)系地址，包括電話、傳真和電子郵箱等登記準確無誤。有些作者在輸入文件時過于匆忙，十個圖只輸入一半，這樣的稿件即使到了編輯部也不能送審，只能返回作者補漏。原稿在網(wǎng)上成功投出后，作者馬上就能收到編輯部的回執(zhí)。 編輯部收到稿件后，有的是直接送審，有的是先進行一步初選(主要是檢查論文的英文是否過關(guān))，然后再送審。一旦文件修改完畢，作者又要根據(jù)出版社信函中的提示，上網(wǎng)按步驟再將原稿發(fā)回刊物的編輯部。如果缺少這份問答文件，在許多期刊網(wǎng)上投發(fā)修改稿時會出現(xiàn)障礙，應(yīng)引起作者的注意。這種情況不多，但在網(wǎng)上這樣的文章也同樣記錄在案。 由此可見，網(wǎng)上投稿的好處的確很多，難怪深受廣大作者的歡迎。當(dāng)然前面各步驟也可能很慢的，要看編輯的處理情況。一步會比較快，但也有慢的。We aim to test the feasibility (reliability) of the ...It is hoped that the qutestion will be resolved (fall away) with our proposedmethod (approach).提出自己的觀點We aim toThis paper reports onprovides resultsextends the method..focus onThe purpose of this paper is toFurthermore, Moreover, In addition, we will also discuss...c) 圈定自己的研究范圍前言的另外一個作用就是告訴讀者包括(reviewer)你的文章主要研究內(nèi)容。不合適的句子通常會遭到reviewer的置疑。Or, 可以直接用First, Second, Third...Finally,..當(dāng)然,Furthermore, in addition等可以用來補充說明。總之，寫文章的目的是要讓讀者讀懂，讀得清晰，并且采取各種措施方便于讀者。但是，這些通過你的一些建議，這些問題在將來的研究中游可能實現(xiàn)。 Review on the directly relevant refs will be more helpful for the reader. Also, timefrequency and wavelets are mainly for nonstationary and transient analysis. The author may discuss in more detail what types of transients and nonstationary ponents would appear in rotor system vibration. 如果刻意隱藏文章的漏洞，覺得別人看不出來，是非常不明智的。所以可以把討論部份分為兩部份，一部份提出觀點，另一部份詳細介紹過程以及論述的依據(jù)。比如，如果敘述有時間順序的事件或者文獻，最早的文獻可用AA advocated it for the first time.接下來，可用Then BB further demonstrated that..再接下來，可用Afterwards, CC..如果還有，可用More recent studies by DD..如果敘述兩種觀點，要把它們截然分開AA pput forward that...In contrast, BB believeor Unlike AA, BB suggestor On the contrary (表明前面的觀點錯誤，如果只是表明兩種對立的觀點，用in contrast)， BB.. 如果兩種觀點相近,可用AA suggestSimilarily, alternatively, BB..Or Also, BBor BB allso does ..表示因果或者前后關(guān)系，可用Consequently, therefore, as a result,表明遞進關(guān)系，可用furthermore, further, moreover, in addition,當(dāng)寫完一段英文，最好首先檢查一下是否較好地應(yīng)用了這些連接詞?；蛘哒f，further studies on ... will be summarized in our next study (or elsewhere)總之，其目的就是讓讀者把思路集中到你要討論的問題上來。其他庫的狀態(tài)，基本是大同小異，供參考： a)如何指出當(dāng)前研究的不足以及有目的地引導(dǎo)出自己的研究的重要性。 9. Minor revision/Major revision這個時候可以稍微慶祝一下了，問題不大了，因為有修 改就有可能。 一、投稿信1. Dear Dr. Defendi ML:I am sending a manuscript entitled “” by – which I should like to submit for possible publication in the journal of .Yours sincerely2. Dear Dr. A:Enclosed is a manuscript entitled “” by sb, which we are submitting for publication in the journal of . We have chosen this journal because it deals with . We believe that sth would be of interest to the journal’s readers.3. Dear Dr. A:Please find enclosed for your review an original research article, “” by sb. All authors have read and approve this version of the article, and due care has been taken to ensure the integrity of the work. No part of this paper has published or submitted elsewhere. No conflict of interest exits in the submission of this manuscript, and we have attached to this letter the signed letter granting us permission to use Figure 1 from another source.We appreciate your consideration of our manuscript, and we look forward to receiving ments from the reviewers.二、詢問有無收到稿件Dear Editors,We dispatched our manuscript to your journal on 3 August 2006 but have not, as yet, receive acknowledgement of their safe arrival. We fear that may have been lost and should be grateful if you would let us know whether or not you have received them. If not, we will send our manuscript again. Thank you in advance for your help.三、詢問論文審查回音Dear Editors，It is more than 12 weeks s