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drinking, singing and dancing.3.3 要注重寫作卷面的整潔。通過不斷的實踐,考生才能在書面寫作上達到多樣化的目標,從而使書面表達形象、生動,給評分者留下深刻印象。②簡單句,短句。在精讀上汲取營養(yǎng),在練習(xí)中加強句意表達的準確性,減少不必要的錯誤,從而提高書面表達的檔次。試比較閱讀以下例文:now, internet is developing so quickly, 1 it give⒉ me a lot of benefits. first of all, we can get the earliest and widest informations,3 so we can save the money of buying newspapers, and save time of having to library or other the second, we call5 mail our friends in very short time and can buy somethings6 we need in the internet. other wise7 ,there8 are so many good software tools, we can download them to use. the most of important9,they are free. 1.錯誤逗號2.主謂搭配不一致3.修飾語搭配不當4.詞性錯誤5.拼寫錯誤6.不定代詞錯誤7.關(guān)聯(lián)詞、拼寫錯誤8.大小寫錯誤9.固定短語使用錯誤經(jīng)修整后的書面表達now, the fastdeveloping internet brings us a lot of benefits. first of all, we can get the latest information, so we can save the money used for newspapers and the time spent in the library. the second, we can our friends in a fraction of second,