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【正文】 I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on. 結(jié)尾：感悟體會(huì) Let’s practice! 例：請(qǐng)以“ ”為題，根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一次愉快的參觀． Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm wele. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well！ At noon we had a piic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We enjoyed ourselves. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers. 范文 A Visit to a Farm 例 – A traffic accident 首段： 首段概括交代事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等信息 A week ago, I witnessed a traffic accident in a rainy day on my way to school, which still sticks in my mind. 例 – A traffic accident 中心段： 交待細(xì)節(jié)，注重在 how。 A I wish you can help me. B I’m looking forward to your help. Which is better? 他們很早就到了。 2. 中國(guó)式的英語(yǔ)（不正確的英文表達(dá)會(huì)讓 整句不得分 ）。 How can we write a good position(作文 )? 第一步： 都要 認(rèn)真審題 ，明確寫(xiě)作 體裁 、 要求 和提示 要點(diǎn) How can we write a good position? (Have a discussion!) 具體做法： 用筆勾畫(huà) 假如你是王林 。它可以包括歷史，游記，報(bào)道，回憶，故事，瑣事等。 因此，在細(xì)節(jié)的選擇上應(yīng)注意選擇與主題密切相關(guān) 的內(nèi)容，從而點(diǎn)明文章中心。 具體做法： 根據(jù)段落整理寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn) 不要遺漏要點(diǎn)！ Write an Outline Introduction Main body Conclusion { { I want to join… 本人特點(diǎn) “愛(ài)心”表現(xiàn) 加入目的 看表格 看表格 看圖 自擬 I hope you will agree with me. 可以用英文或中文 姓名 /性別 易漏掉的要點(diǎn)！ 自薦信 What will you write？ 王林 Who are you in this letter? 人稱(chēng) : I What’s your purpose ? 加入該俱樂(lè)部 時(shí)態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主 Thinking: Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. I’d like to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others. 扣分原因一詞數(shù)不夠！ Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. I’d like to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others. Introduction 本人特點(diǎn) 加入目的 扣分原因二 遺漏要點(diǎn)！ Write an Outline Introduction Main body Conclusion { { I am a boy… I’d like to join… 本人特點(diǎn) “愛(ài)心”表現(xiàn) 加入目的 I hope you will agree with me. ? ? ? ? ? 無(wú)法拿滿(mǎn)分！ Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang Lin 少了 兩個(gè) 重要部分，扣 56分，只得 1112分！ 缺少 “愛(ài)心”表現(xiàn) 也缺少 Conclusion “愛(ài)心”表現(xiàn) (exampl
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