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instead, you choose different words or phrases for different contexts. Only a small part of them are used by ordinary people for ordinary purposes. Sometimes one may use the wrong words, but more often the words he uses are not entirely wrong, but inappropriate, inexact, unidiomatic or uninteresting. A Basic Knowledge of Diction ? Levels of Words ? The Meaning of Words ? General amp。 教 案 周 次 第 4 周,第 3 次課 授課時(shí)間 授課章節(jié) Part Ten Punctuation (1) 本 (章 )節(jié) 授課方式 課堂講授 (√) 實(shí)踐課 ( ) 教學(xué)時(shí)數(shù) 2 學(xué)時(shí) 授 課 要 點(diǎn) 本 (章) 節(jié) 教 學(xué) 目 標(biāo) 1. To know more about punctuation 2. To talk about mon mistakes made in TEM4 writing of the students 教 學(xué) 重 點(diǎn) 和 難 點(diǎn) 1. Comma 2. Semicolon 3. Common mistakes made in TEM4 writing 思考題 或 作 業(yè) 1. Review what they have learned in the writing course. 2. Preview Textbook Part Ten Punctuation 教學(xué)內(nèi)容與組織安排 Time allotment: Common mistakes made in TEM4 writing of the students 45 min Punctuation 45min I. Common mistakes made in TEM4 writing of the students After reading students’ writing, I have selected 50 sentences with mon mistakes to enable students to discover their problems and correct them. The wrong sentences are as follows: 1. London Olympic Games has just past. 2. Nowadays, each country is paying more and more attention on people’s health. 3. I’d like to invite you e to join us. 4. Sports stars should devote themselves money to the charity. 5. Finally, it leads to the distance of the poor and the rich. The last but not the least, I think… 6. I represent for all the classmates to invite you to join our New Years dinner. 7. We are looking forward for your arrival. 8. In my opinion, they are deserved these rewards. 9. They should be full of energy at public. 10. They would better to pay more attention on their undertakings. 11. One can do something they like to do, isn’t happy? 12. Why no using this? 13. I behalf of my class to invite you join us. 14. If you are convenient… 15. We always respect for others. 16. It is true that increasingly people think that some sports stars are attracting too much public attention. 17. They training hard every day. 18. A healthy body is a basic of everything. 19. Appear a lot of great sports stars who attract too much public attention and earn too much money. 20. From my point of view, I think… 21. We all put our attention on them. 22. For example, the famous star Liu Xiang. 23. On the one hand…, and on the other hand… 24. To be a star, you should show us your positive image. 25. Secondly, people give the sports stars too many expectations, resulting in many sports stars before the game to have too much pressure, so they loss of the game. 26. Nowadays, some sports stars are attracting too much public attention and earning too much money, I think it’s truth. There are some reasons as follows 27. In spite of he earns so much, what he brings us are more. 28. golden medal 29. There is another reason I against 30. Because sports stars are also the typical present of the country. 31. Because they once the injury may fall at the source of the troubles also may bee disabled. 32. So why don’t they can attract public attention. 33. I think it is deserved for them. 34. In my opinion, public attentions and money of sports stars are due to them. 35. After they won the petition, don’t should not attracting much attentions and money this is rewards of their efforts. 36. What’s more, somebody of them are not for these admire but to delicate their ability as well as strengthen people in themselves country or win the admire for country. 37. All the nation should proud them, too. 38. So this will be passed by that our country can do better in the future. 39. As long as we have to pay should be affirmed. 40. It them who give us too much move. 41. They are going to lost themselves. 42. It does not only have bad effection on athletes but also society. 43. Please write back to me with your answer before tomorrow. 44. Even stars also need individual space, we should respect their private life as same as like them. 45. Sports stars maybe can e true their dreams. 46. Sometimes, sports stars have too much money, they don’t happy. Money can’t buy happy. 47. Our class warm wele your invitation. 48. So please you must join our dinner tonight. 49. Because a little people can bee a athlete or star. 50. This is our and athlete’s difference. There are also some wrong titles asking for our attention. Titles How do we treat this? Do worth attracting Discussion Should Sports Stars Can Earn Too Much Money? So, we would like to have a look at the topic and the sample essay. Section A COMPOSITION WRITING Nowadays many people think that some sports stars are attracting too much public attention and earning too much money. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write a position of about 200 words. Section B NOTEWRITING Write a note of about 5060 words based on the following situation: You are the monitor of your class. On behalf of your classmates, you are going to write an invitation to your foreign teacher, Mary, to ask her to join your New Year’s dinner. Please tell her the exact time and place that you are going to have the dinner. Sample Essays for TEM 4 Writing (1) On Sports Stars It is true that nowadays the ines of many sports stars are much larger than an average person can ever expect. Some people claim that the salaries of athletes are too high and the athletes themselves attract too much public attention. Yet, in my opinion, such benefits are well deserved. First and foremost, athletes deserve the high payments out of their persistent efforts and