【正文】 用 6 運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯 7 運(yùn)用正確的語法 8 運(yùn)用合適的句子結(jié)構(gòu) 9 使用正確的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號 10 運(yùn)用銜接手段表達(dá)句間關(guān)系（如對比、原因、結(jié)果、程度、目的等） ? D 寫作格式 11 運(yùn)用正確的符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣的寫作格式 四級作文題評分原則 ? (Global Scoring)方法。 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 15分。 8分 —基本切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯?！八阉饕妗?，“郵件或軟件” ? （ 5）分兩點(diǎn)詳述網(wǎng)絡(luò)的缺點(diǎn)：浪費(fèi)時間、金錢和精力；沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)影響未來發(fā)展。 ? Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former/ latter one. For one thing+理由 1. For another+理由 2. Considering these, I may conclude… 范文 ? When it es to whether the university campus should be open to tourists, there is no plete agreement among people. Some people take it for granted that university campus should embrace tourists across the country. However, others maintain that the university campus should be closed to tourists. ? Those people who hold the first opinion believe that refusing tourists is contradicting universities’ openness of spirit. In addition, they insist that no university has the right to reject tourists to enter its grounds because it is public land. However, still others think differently. In their opinion, too many tourists will add a burden to the security of the university. Besides, they argue that these tourists will destroy the quiet environment and influence students’ normal study. ? ? Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former opinion. For one thing, by visiting the university, high school students can experience the campus atmosphere and be stimulated to make a better preparation for the college entrance exam. For another, a university is a public place and should impart the spirit of openness. Considering these, I may reasonably conclude that the university campus should wele all tourists. ? 模版例文： ?社會上存在許多不誠實(shí)現(xiàn)象 ?誠實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠實(shí) ? It Pays to Be Honest 觀點(diǎn)論證型模板 ? Nowadays, there still exists +與論點(diǎn)相沖突想象 . However+文章論點(diǎn) . The following reasons can support the argument. ? Undoubtedly, 論據(jù) 1,進(jìn)一步說明論據(jù) 1. Furthermore, 論據(jù) 2. For example, 支持論據(jù) 2的事例 . In addition, 論據(jù) 3. ? All mentioned above tell us that 重申觀點(diǎn) . Therefore, we should 正確態(tài)度或做法 . 范文 ? Nowadays, there still exist many dishonest phenomena, such as cheating, overcharging, producing or selling fake modities. However, in the long run, dishonesty can bring many disadvantages while it pays to be honest. The following reasons can support the argument. ? Undoubtedly, being honest is not only beneficial to others but also to ourselves. If you are honest, those who associate with you will certainly profit from you and in turn you will win trust and respect from them. ? Furthermore, honesty can help build up a more stable and harmonious society. For example, Singapore, which is a society of trust whothiness, has a paratively low criminal rate. In addition, being honest is essential for a country’s survival in the modern world, since only an honest country would have won support from other countries if it were in trouble. ? All mentioned above tell us that it pays to be honest. Only in an honest society can people fully enjoy their life. Therefore, we should foster the spirit of honesty and let dishonesty have no place to stay in our society. 應(yīng)用文類型 ? 四級考試中的應(yīng)用文一般會給出一個特定的情景，要求考生根據(jù)該情景寫一封短信、倡議書或演說詞等。 / 我寫信來想就 …… 一事提出我的建議。 (4) If I were you, I would… 如果我是你，我將 …… (5) It would seem to me that you could… . 在我看來，你可以 …… 應(yīng)用文類型 (6) As you may agree that… 或許你會同意 …… 。 (10) I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details. 我會準(zhǔn)備好與你進(jìn)一步詳談此事。 ? 強(qiáng)調(diào)某一點(diǎn)的重要性時，可用 surely truly undoubtedly clearly indeed as a matter of fact來加強(qiáng)句子的力度。 ? It follows that... It can be inferred that... It suggests that...則將讀者引入的邏輯推理思路。 excellent, outstanding。 heaps of ? Important—crucial, vital, significant, key。 ? for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion ? 破壞 ? Destroy。 devastate。經(jīng)濟(jì)增長方式轉(zhuǎn)變緩解發(fā)展壓力 A number of measures were taken to alleviate the problem.) ? Worsen—deteriorate。 1. 主動變被動 1）不需要體現(xiàn)動作的執(zhí)行者 【 原文 】 We should pay more attention to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country. 【 優(yōu)化 】 More attention should be paid to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country. 2）需要強(qiáng)調(diào)動作的承受者 【 原文 】 The employees elected Mr. Li chairman of the mittee last week. 【 優(yōu)化 】 Mr. Li was elected chairman of the mittee by the employees last week. 3）保持陳述對象的一致，以求行文通順 【 原文 】 When the Prime Minister arrived at the airport, hundreds of reporters surrounded him immediately. 【 優(yōu)化 】 When the Prime Minister arrived at the airport, he was immediately surrounded by hundreds of reporters. 2. 被動變主動 1）需要體現(xiàn)動作的執(zhí)行者 【 原文 】 If you are friendly to others, you will be held hospitable attitude towards by them and vice versa. 【 優(yōu)化 】 If you are friendly to others, they will hold hospitable attitude towards you and vice versa. 2）保持陳述對象的一致，以求行文通順 【 原文 】 One very important quality developed by many individuals during a first job is selfreliance. This quality was cultivated by me when I was allowed by my supervisor to set up and conduct my own survey project. 【 優(yōu)化 】 During their first job, many individuals develop their very important quality of selfreliance. I cultivated this quality when my supervisor allowed me to set up and conduct my own survey project. 專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練 一、要求 ：請將下面句子中語態(tài)使用不當(dāng)?shù)牡胤竭M(jìn)行優(yōu)化改寫，使其更符合表達(dá)需要。每段對話均朗讀一遍，每個問題后留有 15秒的答題時間。 聽力理解部分考核的技能 、態(tài)度等 ，如從連續(xù)的話語中辨別語音、理解重音和語音語調(diào)等 ，如比較、原因、結(jié)果、程度、目的 短對話 ——聽到的往往不是答案 ? 該題型需要考生事先預(yù)讀選項(xiàng)，尋找選項(xiàng)規(guī)律，從而實(shí)現(xiàn)預(yù)測對話內(nèi)容及答案的可能性。 復(fù)合式聽寫 ——主抓單詞 ? 由于該題型對考生的理解和速記能力要求都較高，所以建議考生將做題的重點(diǎn)放在前面的 7個單詞空缺上，力爭在意思和拼寫上都不要出錯。要求考生閱讀一篇刪去若干詞匯的短文，然后從所給的選項(xiàng)中選擇正確的詞匯填空，使短文復(fù)原