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Little Red Riding Hood:(拼命地跑)Oh!No! No! Wolf:(追到Little Red Riding Hood,做吃狀,拍拍肚子說)It’s delicious. I still sleep. I like sleeping. Hunter: (一邊拿著槍,一邊做尋找狀出場(chǎng))Where’s the wolf? Look! A door.(推門)The wolf is sleeping. Wolf:(發(fā)出呼呼的響聲) Hunter: (端起槍想打,又放下)What a big stomach! (摸摸Wolf的肚子)Grandma and Little Red Riding Hood are inside .I must be hurry.(從桌子上拿起剪刀,舉起) Look! Scissors. (做剪Wolf的肚子)Cut, cut, cut. Little Red Riding Hood/Grandma:Thank you. Hunter: Grandma ,give me some needles and thread.Little Red Riding Hood ,Give me some stones. Grandma: (從桌子上拿來針線) Little Red Riding Hood:(搬來幾個(gè)石頭)One, two, three. Hunter: (把小石頭裝進(jìn)Wolf的衣服里) Grandma: I39。The forest concert is going to begin. You’d better go and prepare for 。松鼠、小猴:See you later!等會(huì)見!狐貍:See you later! My beautiful peacock. Where are you? Can you hear me?等會(huì)見!美麗的孔雀。 你們誰有呢?Oh! What are you saying? Have I got any friends? Oh, no, no. 哦!你說什么? 我有沒有朋友? 哦,不、不。 我正到處找你呢???!你的耳朵這么長(zhǎng),They are too terrible. And all of your friends are ugly too. Do you think so?(對(duì)觀眾)他們太可怕了。 這對(duì)你不好。Please be our friend. And please join us! We all like your dance.請(qǐng)成為我們的朋友吧!并請(qǐng)參加我們的音樂劇吧!我們都喜歡你跳舞。狐貍:Oh, I have to leave now. You are too proud.哦,我必須走了。 我太餓了。 Look! The two fat arms. They are delicious! 看!那兩只結(jié)實(shí)的胳膊。經(jīng)過一系列的格斗,阿拉丁救出公主后,兩人快樂地在一起。s ugliness melted away to reveal a beautiful enchantress. The princess tried to apologize, but it was too late, for she had seen that there was no love in her heart, and as punishment, she transformed her into a hideous丑惡的beast, and placed a powerful spell on the castle, and all who lived there. Ashamed of her monstrous異形的form, the beast concealed隱藏herself inside her castle, with a magic mirror as her only window to the outside world. The rose she had offered was truly an enchanted rose, which would bloom until her twentyfirst year. If she could learn to love another, and earn her love in return by the time the last petal花瓣fell, then the spell would be broken. If not, she would be doomed注定to remain a beast for all time. As the years passed, she fell into despair絕望, and lost all hope, for who could ever learn to love a beast?(We have seen a progression of stained褪色的glass windows illustrating加上插圖the narration故事, as well as BEAST shredding撕碎her portrait. The camera slowly zooms out from the castle and we see the title. Fade up on the home of BELLE. She exits the front door and begins her walk into town.)beggar man (XH) 手持飯碗,向公主(LF)乞討:give me sth to eat, I am so hungry! LF 很兇暴,口中念著咒語:馬里馬里貝貝哄…… LF開始變形(狂抓頭發(fā)……)劇情展開:帥哥a kind and brave man(HL)出場(chǎng)dangdangdangdang ……后面圍著一堆花癡,在討論。ll go away.HL: Is someone there?COGSWORTH: Not a word, Lumiere. Not one word!HL: I don39。shand.)Ow ow Ow OW OW OUCH!!!!!LUMIERE: Of course, handsome boy, you are wele here.HL: (looking around in confusion) Who said that? (He picks up thecandlestick for light, not realizing that the speaker is in hishand)LUMIERE: (Tapping him on the shoulder) Over here!HL: (Spins around, pulling LUMIERE to the other side) Where?LUMIERE: (Taps HL on the side of the head. HL looks at LUMIERE.)Allo!HL: Oh!!!! (Startled, he drops LUMIERE onto the floor.) Incredible不可思議的!COGSWORTH: (hopping over) Well, now you39。s a stranger here.(很生氣,轉(zhuǎn)向HL)” Who are you! What are you doing here?”(和SS嚇的抱在一起)HL(膽子大,盯著她看):” I was lost in the woods and...”LF: You are not wele here!HL: I39。(2)運(yùn)用細(xì)節(jié)描寫和場(chǎng)面描寫。故成長(zhǎng)離不開挫折。挫折是成功的必經(jīng)路,彩虹是橋,抵達(dá)彼岸之橋。因此,我們可以通過敘述成長(zhǎng)過程中所遇到的某件事或某幾件事及感受,來展現(xiàn)成長(zhǎng)路上要經(jīng)受挫折、磨難或苦難,才能成長(zhǎng)的主題。點(diǎn)睛:面對(duì)紛繁復(fù)雜的大千世界,面對(duì)林林總總的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷,立意的高低關(guān)鍵在于如何能從平凡小事看到大道理,如何能由司空見慣的生活揭示出與社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí)密切相關(guān)的大主題,怎樣才能看得深,怎樣才能看到事物的本質(zhì)。閱讀下面提示,按要求作文。是啊,那時(shí),她正年輕。是啊,那時(shí),她正年輕。就在這種“既要馬兒吃得少,又要馬兒好好跑”的白色恐怖下,我的學(xué)習(xí)可謂度日如年,每次看到她的嚴(yán)厲的眼神,我就暗自提醒自己,堅(jiān)持就是勝利,我是真怕?。【瓦@樣,我在緊張充實(shí)而又自由的狀態(tài)下遨游學(xué)海,勇攀書山,成績(jī)一天天好起來,后來一直名列前茅。震驚之余,回望十幾年的日子,我真切的感受到她已不再年輕!今天在考場(chǎng)上,我寫下這些幼稚粗糙的文字,不是為了感恩,因?yàn)樗亩髑槲医裆袷烙肋h(yuǎn)報(bào)答不完;也不是為了炫耀,因?yàn)槲抑烂總€(gè)人都有一個(gè)疼他愛他的她;只是在心底我覺得需要紀(jì)念一下,陪伴養(yǎng)育我長(zhǎng)大的母親。命題作文的命題內(nèi)容呈現(xiàn)出豐富多彩的傾向:或貼近考生生活關(guān)注個(gè)體成長(zhǎng),或啟迪考生思考人生哲理,或引導(dǎo)考生聚焦社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)……豐富多樣的命題,給考生作文的選材提供了更為廣闊的空間。題目要求非常簡(jiǎn)單明確,沒有跑題偏題的風(fēng)險(xiǎn),考生只要考慮選擇的事件和表現(xiàn)的主題即可。具體寫法見仁見智一,因人而異了。【答案】藝術(shù)之美大廳里,是誰在歡唱?輕輕吹開不愉快的陰霾,聆聽那優(yōu)美的旋律。我唱著,唱著,慢慢進(jìn)入了歌中的世界。但很快,《相信自己》的音樂傳入耳畔。時(shí)間過得飛快,轉(zhuǎn)眼間到了石板唱的《最好的未來》。我仿佛看見那大海之中,海燕飛向藍(lán)天,那是他們最好的未來。不僅是舞動(dòng)身姿,跳躍著。點(diǎn)睛:本題除了認(rèn)真填寫標(biāo)題外,還要注意作文的要求“自選一個(gè)地名、人名、建筑名或者雕塑、音樂、繪畫等藝術(shù)品名”,這個(gè)要求是硬性和直觀的,所以考生要在寫作的過程中注意落實(shí)要求。,選好角度,寫觸動(dòng)心靈的人或事,抒發(fā)真情實(shí)感。先前是爺爺守著老屋。而我印象中染紅老屋門口的那一抹殘陽,落了又起,起了又落。她也不解釋,只是如爺爺一樣沉默地坐著,大家違拗不了她。偶爾也有三三兩兩的老婆婆們聚在老屋的門口,談著那些誰會(huì)先入土的事情,平平常常地,如同拉家常一樣。時(shí)間久了,老屋也成了搖搖欲墜的危房。那時(shí)候,我天真地應(yīng)了一句:“爸,等我老了,也住在這屋里。但有些事物,如同老屋的門,經(jīng)歷了太多太多,卻依舊沉默無語?!窘馕觥吭囶}分析:這是一個(gè)填充式半命題作文,每一位考生都能有話可說,有感而發(fā)。點(diǎn)睛:半命題作文考生在補(bǔ)題時(shí),所選擇的詞語,應(yīng)該與自己平時(shí)庫存較為豐富的生活經(jīng)歷相契合;所確定的內(nèi)容,應(yīng)該是自己較為熟悉、感受較為深刻的生活事件或情感體驗(yàn)。經(jīng)過中考的洗禮,你成了一名高中生。寫出你的真情實(shí)感。暴風(fēng)雨,也有它存在的理由,它可以平靜我們內(nèi)心的煩躁,拂走我們心底的塵埃。頓時(shí)感覺到自己的前途灰暗無比。不經(jīng)意的向右一瞄,我的目光便被深深牽住了。我便報(bào)名來到了這里,成了勾勒這世界的一份子。難道我又要放棄了嗎?難道真的我什么也做不好了嗎?不,我不能就此放棄!我要努力獲得成功,徹底地改變自己!我重新拿起畫筆,不斷的練習(xí),在我的堅(jiān)持不懈下,我終于尋到了一絲柔和的影子。我走在路上,那冰冷的雨水打在我身上,卻讓我感到了平靜。暴風(fēng)雨,也有它存在的理由,它可以磨練你,讓你品嘗到成功的甘甜。命題作文題目、寫作要求明確完整,利于考生通過審題立意構(gòu)思選材的步驟,迅速構(gòu)思行文。同時(shí),在成文的時(shí)候,還要注意時(shí)代感,要有時(shí)代意識(shí)。從幼稚到成熟是改變自己,從懦弱到勇敢是改變自己,從平凡到偉大,從拒絕到接納,從厭惡到熱愛……都是對(duì)自己的改變。一件小事,一種小物,一念之間……基本上都是積極的改變。微笑、鼓勵(lì)……,改變了我。丟掉羞澀,做一個(gè)活潑開朗的人。遇到困難時(shí),才發(fā)現(xiàn)自己有多么無助。他通過泯去后天的經(jīng)過世俗熏染的“偽我”,以求返歸一個(gè)“真我”。因?yàn)楦淖冏约海删土酥袊?guó)文學(xué)史上的一大奇跡?!敬鸢浮课蚁胍男腋P腋J且粋€(gè)十分美妙的詞,讓每個(gè)人不知疲倦地為它努力前行。但并非每個(gè)人都能知道自己想要的幸福是什么,往往幸福的真諦會(huì)因我們所處的階段不同而變化。覺得我想要的幸福便是擁有一片自由的天空,有一個(gè)獨(dú)屬于自己的天地。或許將來待我年老時(shí),我想要的幸福就變成一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的愿望:一家人在一起平平安安的,能夠不愁溫飽就行了。寫作其實(shí)是語文學(xué)科中對(duì)學(xué)生綜合能力考查最全面、最集中的一種方式,語文基本功方面的遣詞造句、謀篇布局、立意剪裁;語文核心素養(yǎng)方面:包括思辨能力、人文情懷、理想情操等。命題作文少卻了擬題的環(huán)節(jié),但是同樣的標(biāo)題,同樣的內(nèi)容限制下,如何寫出亮眼的文章來,就需要我們下番功夫了。從文體來說,當(dāng)然可以寫成議論文,談幸福的不容易,幸福的價(jià)值和意義,最后談怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的幸福。然而,這不是他想要的“幸福”,他需要爸爸媽媽給他精神上更多、更大的安慰。語言是詩意的,但內(nèi)容一定是“心靈雞湯”,才能動(dòng)人心魄、催人思索。她為了人類的進(jìn)步和文明而活著,并為人類的文明貢獻(xiàn)了畢生的精力,因而她是幸福的,就像雨果所說的:錢包空空時(shí),心靈即豐滿。稻谷有根,深扎在泥土,你也有根 扎根在人們心里。”3. 幸福在哪里?朋友我告訴你。上山尋路,扎實(shí)工作,廉潔奉公,牢記黨的話,溫暖群眾的心。但他始終把工作當(dāng)事業(yè)干,樂在其中。這種作文對(duì)于學(xué)生來說,有喜有憂。如果一個(gè)考生的文字功底比較好,對(duì)世事有一定的洞悉和感悟,寫成詩情畫意、清新雋永的散文,不啻是一種絕佳的選擇。但是,幸福是一種感覺,不能用數(shù)據(jù)來衡量。一如歌曲里所唱,它在辛勤的工作中;它在艱苦的勞動(dòng)里。要求:①立意自定,不少于 800 字;②不得抄襲;③書寫規(guī)范,工整。盡管在實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的過程中,會(huì)有很多挫折和無數(shù)的磨難,但我仍不會(huì)灰心喪氣。小的時(shí)候我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想,我夢(mèng)想有一天我可以變成一只風(fēng)箏飄蕩在藍(lán)天白云間。漸漸地我懂事了也