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ters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker。如: He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. ④ 分詞短語(yǔ).如: Satisfied with the result, he dicided to go on with a new experiment. ? ⑤ 倒裝句 ? Only in this way can we achieve our goal. ? Never before have I seen such a wonderful film. ? ⑥ 省略句 ? If so, victory will be ours. ? You can make some changes wherever necessary. ? ⑦ 對(duì)比,這在中文中也是常使用的方法.如 ? Failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is. ? When I play, I feel excited, and after it I feel relaxed. ? (3) 通過(guò)分句和合句,增強(qiáng)句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。 改變句子的開(kāi)頭方式,不要一味地以主語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭,接著是謂語(yǔ),賓語(yǔ),最后再加一個(gè)狀語(yǔ)。安子嶺總校 上課老師:袁亮 初中英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作精講 作文寫(xiě)作的字、詞、句、段、篇 ? 字 :工整、清楚; ? 詞 :不拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤;能適當(dāng)掌握高級(jí)詞匯; ? 句 :不出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤;句子要逐漸使用復(fù)雜的從句句型,為文章添彩; ? 段 :段落內(nèi)容有邏輯性; ? 篇 :合理安排文章布局;要有邏輯與聯(lián)接; 絕對(duì)好用的替換詞 ? Good– wonderful, excellent, geous, fabulous, amazing, magnificent。 ? ( 1)句式要有變化。 ? ①?gòu)?qiáng)調(diào)句 ? [原文 ] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. ? [修正 ] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely. ? ② 由 what等引導(dǎo)的從句,此處的 what相當(dāng)于中文中的“所 … …‖ ,有很強(qiáng)的概括,如: ? [原文 ] We had to stand here to catch offender. ? [修正 ] What we had to do was ( to ) stand there, trying to catch the o