八年級英語寫作(教學課件)-全文預覽
【正文】 ters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker。如： He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. ④ 分詞短語．如： Satisfied with the result, he dicided to go on with a new experiment. ? ⑤ 倒裝句 ? Only in this way can we achieve our goal. ? Never before have I seen such a wonderful film. ? ⑥ 省略句 ? If so, victory will be ours. ? You can make some changes wherever necessary. ? ⑦ 對比，這在中文中也是常使用的方法．如 ? Failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is. ? When I play, I feel excited, and after it I feel relaxed. ? (3) 通過分句和合句，增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。 改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地以主語開頭，接著是謂語，賓語，最后再加一個狀語。安子嶺總校 上課老師：袁亮 初中英語作文寫作精講 作文寫作的字、詞、句、段、篇 ? 字 ：工整、清楚； ? 詞 ：不拼寫錯誤；能適當掌握高級詞匯； ? 句 ：不出現(xiàn)語法錯誤；句子要逐漸使用復雜的從句句型，為文章添彩； ? 段 ：段落內(nèi)容有邏輯性； ? 篇 ：合理安排文章布局；要有邏輯與聯(lián)接； 絕對好用的替換詞 ? Good– wonderful, excellent, geous, fabulous, amazing, magnificent。 ? （ 1）句式要有變化。 ? ①強調(diào)句 ? [原文 ] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. ? [修正 ] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely. ? ② 由 what等引導的從句，此處的 what相當于中文中的“所 … …‖ ，有很強的概括，如： ? [原文 ] We had to stand here to catch offender. ? [修正 ] What we had to do was ( to ) stand there, trying to catch the o
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