【正文】 看法。（大眾媒介、社會(huì)服務(wù)等） 3. 我打算怎么做。（提示：人口增長(zhǎng)、工業(yè)用水、污染 …… ） 3. 我們應(yīng)該怎么辦。 2. 雙休日可能給大學(xué)生帶來的問題。 全真題 17. () Advantages of a Job Interview 14 1. 現(xiàn)在找工作一般都需要面試 ， 通過面試 ， 面試者 (interviewer)和應(yīng)試者(interviewee)可以相互了解情況。 2. 我理想的職業(yè)是 …… 3. 我怎樣為理想的職業(yè)做準(zhǔn)備。 全真題 14. () The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller 1. 現(xiàn)代化的交通工具越來越發(fā)達(dá)。 2. 人與人之間的交往越來越頻繁。 3. 你的體會(huì)。 2. 我對(duì)考試的態(tài)度。 () 九、四級(jí)考試歷年寫作全真題 全真題 1. () ? Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a position on the topic Women in The Modern World. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your position on the outline (given in English) below. 11 1. Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. 2. With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. 3. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been pletely realized. 全真題 2 () An Early Morning Walk 1. One morning I got up very early, and everything around was very quiet. 2. When I arrived at the park, I found, to my surprise, that there were so many people there. 3. Taking early morning walks make a man healthy and wise. 全 真題 3. () The Tape Recorder 1. The tape recorder is one of the most wele and popular electronic devices ever invented. 2. This device is used in many ways. 3. However, it can also bee a nuisance. 全真題 4. (90. 1) What Would Happen If There Were No Power 1. Ever since early this century, electricity has bee an essential part of our life. 2. If there were no electric power, … 3. Therefore, … 全真題 5. () BicyclesAn Important Means of Transport in China 1. 為什么自行車在中國這樣普及。（如 , 的作文） ? 就某一事實(shí)說明情況，分析原因，展望未來。要寫好一篇英語文章，關(guān)鍵要在平時(shí)下功夫，打好牢固的基礎(chǔ)，但是如果這一功夫在使用的時(shí)候不講技巧，不但不能事半功倍地發(fā)揮出最高技巧，取得最佳成績(jī)，甚至可能出現(xiàn)與實(shí)際水平相去甚遠(yuǎn)的低成績(jī)。缺乏應(yīng)試技巧，主要表現(xiàn)為有些學(xué)生在篇首或篇尾有喊口號(hào)傾向（如 Dear Friends, let39。更有相當(dāng)一部分學(xué)生在文章中寫幫忙就是這一次四級(jí)考試當(dāng)中的幫忙。作為學(xué)生，作文著眼于學(xué)生之間的關(guān)系，反映學(xué)生之間的幫忙，這并不為過，但是這種幫忙不能僅僅限于在考試當(dāng)中的幫忙，而且對(duì)這種幫忙都是一句話 ＂ Don39。 第三、缺乏思想，深度不夠。 所以在說過一個(gè)又一個(gè)的＂ No＂再加幾個(gè)＂ Yes＂之后，閱卷老師也給搞得云里 霧里，頭腦發(fā)脹，最后也只得酌情給個(gè)兩三分罷了。有的學(xué)生漢語功底很好，用漢語作文，他們就會(huì)思如泉涌，下筆千言，但是一到用英語作文就好像被縛住了手腳，不知如何下手。它包括定冠詞和不定冠詞的濫用，主謂不一致，單復(fù)數(shù)搞不清楚（例如： a people 等），時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)混亂及詞語的各種形式掌握不牢。國家教委又明確規(guī)定，四級(jí)考試中，如果學(xué)生作文得零分，那么即使前面得了滿分（即 85分），其總成績(jī)?nèi)詫⒁暈椴患案?。undoubtedly 一詞用得好，加重語氣使人耳目一新。 第三段：按提綱要求在舉一例。就英語學(xué)習(xí)而言，最難之處莫過于遺忘。 第二節(jié) 四級(jí)作文范文欣賞 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a position on the topic Practice Makes Perfect. You should write at least 120 words, and base your position in the chart and the outline given below. (1997 年 1 月真題 ) 8 1. 如何理解“熟能生巧” 2. 例如，英語學(xué)習(xí) …… 3. 又如 …… It is wellknown to everyone that “Practice makes perfect.” This is selfevident proverb means doing something repeatedly is the only way to bee expert at it. That is to say, practice makes a great difference between inferiority and perfection. Learning a foreign language like English is a case in point. You can take in a lot about it, such as its pronunciation, vocabulary, sentence structures, grammatical rules, idioms and usage, but all these will quickly escape from your memory without practice. So you must practice listening, speaking, reading and writing so as to acquire the language. Other examples can also be found to prove the proverb. Take cooking for example. A good cook can prepare a delicious meal. But you will not be surprised at his performance if you know how much time he has spent practicing it. Through practice, he then bees an expert at cooking. Undoubtedly, practice makes perfect. Only through practice can one be good at doing things. It is practice, so to speak, that leads to perfection. 分析點(diǎn)評(píng)： 第一段：如何理解“熟能生巧”開篇點(diǎn)題，緊接著就諺語的含義闡釋。有較多的嚴(yán)重 語法錯(cuò)誤，如不完整的句子，時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，詞組用錯(cuò)，單復(fù)數(shù)很亂。最后一段的最后一句很突兀，內(nèi)容不連貫。） 11 points As the chart shows: from year 1990, the average number of hours a student spends on the puter per week has been sharply increased. In 1990, students only spend less than 2 hours on puter work while they spend almost 20 hours on it per week now. That means puter plays a more important role in our daily life than ever before. Why has puter bee so popular? The reasons depend on many things. Firstly, puter has been greatly improved these years. It can do many works. Secondly, it has bee cheaper and cheaper so that most students can afford it. Thirdly, puters are used in many area, from factory to panies, from hospitals to schools, so we should grasp how to use puters. Also there are many problems for us in using puter. For instance, some students spent too much time on playing pc games that would affect their study. So we should learn not only how to use puter but also how to use it properly. 評(píng)論：整體上該考生的作文是切題的，思想表達(dá)清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語法錯(cuò)誤和用詞錯(cuò)誤，如 from year 1990, many works, grasp 等。思想表達(dá)清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好。 However 是過渡詞。接下來考生列舉了三個(gè)理由 (First, … . Also, … . Besides, … .)對(duì)主題句進(jìn)行說明，分析產(chǎn)生這一圖表結(jié)論的原因。該考生對(duì)圖表的描述準(zhǔn)確又精練，并不拖泥帶水。 2. 作文分為 0分，總分若高于 60分，報(bào)分時(shí)一律作為 59分不及格處理；若低于 60分，報(bào)分時(shí)一律再減 6分； 3. 作文分大于 0 分，小于 6 分，則按下式計(jì)算成績(jī)： 例（ 1）原計(jì)算總分為 63 分，實(shí)得作文分為 2 分，最后報(bào)分： 636+2=59分 例（ 2）原計(jì)算總分為 80 分，實(shí)得作文分為 4 分，最后報(bào)分： 636+4=78分 例（ 3）原計(jì)算總分為 55 分，實(shí)得作文分為 3 分，最后報(bào)分： 556+3=52分 六、四 級(jí)考試作文樣文分析 第一節(jié) 四級(jí)考試作文樣文及點(diǎn)評(píng) Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a position on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your position in the chart and the outline given below. (2020 年 6 月真題 ) 1. 上圖所示為 1990 年、 1995 年、 2020 年某校大學(xué)生使用計(jì)算機(jī)的情況，請(qǐng)描述其變化； 2. 請(qǐng)說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因（可從計(jì)算機(jī)的用途、價(jià)格或社會(huì)發(fā)展等方面加以說明）； 3. 你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在計(jì)算機(jī)使用中有什么困難或問題。 只寫一段者： 04 分；只寫兩段者， 09 分（指規(guī)定三段的作文） （ 6）各檔作文相當(dāng)于百分制的得分，列表如下，稱為得分率。僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)誤。 ? 11分：切題。 思想表達(dá)不清楚，連貫性差。 （ 3）閱卷人根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)（如 8 分）相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)（即 8 分）；若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)，則可以加一分（即 9 分）或減一分（即 7 分）。 總之，切題、連貫、準(zhǔn)確是評(píng)分的原則。要考慮 2 作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)了思想，也要考慮是否用英語清楚而