【正文】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old munities can do what they can do to renovate our munities.【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)是描述老社區(qū)改造工程，話題較新。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)Seeing is believing./ Furthermore, while travelling, you can meet more people and make more you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit./ No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。短文中較好的句型有：The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild 。這是文章的主體部分，敘述非常詳細(xì)，內(nèi)容也很充實(shí)，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主題，點(diǎn)明了良好親子關(guān)系的重要性。同時(shí)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：內(nèi)容應(yīng)密切結(jié)合表格中所給的數(shù)據(jù)以及自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，有敘述，有議論?！敬鸢浮縃ow to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parentchild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parentchild relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children. As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild relationship.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以How to get along well with parents為題，就中國青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日對(duì)中美兩國親子關(guān)系問卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行介紹，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，發(fā)表自己的感謝。假設(shè)你是張華，你正在以“如何與父母更好地相處” 為題進(jìn)行英語自主課程研究?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette (禮儀). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給Danny。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。s helpful to people39。Bikesharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________