【正文】 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動(dòng)的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。注意句式的多變，長短句結(jié)合、簡單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，并對將來提出兩點(diǎn)希望。交通：新的飛機(jī)場已投入使用多年。污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。when you read是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。主要從原因和建議兩個(gè)方面去介紹。t read in the sun。原因1. 不良的看書習(xí)慣，如在床上或陽光下看書……2. 長時(shí)間玩手機(jī)、看電視、玩電腦……3. 學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長，作業(yè)多……建議1. 認(rèn)真做眼保健操2. 多吃胡蘿卜等對眼睛有益的食物3. ……參考詞匯： 近視 nearsighted 注意： 1. 內(nèi)容須包括所提示的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 詞數(shù)：80100，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！居⒄Z】九年級下冊英語書面表達(dá)解題技巧講解及練習(xí)題(含答案)及解析一、英語書面表達(dá)1． 世界衛(wèi)生組織的一項(xiàng)研究報(bào)告顯示，我國青少年近視率居世界第一。我校學(xué)生的近視問題調(diào)查情況60%的本校學(xué)生戴眼鏡。t spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and puters. Secondly