【正文】 down of heaps of ageold buildings, their original historic significances would 2 disappear. Most importantly, the trend towards luxury shows the mercialization of college education, which gives negative influence on students. Therefore, I strongly hope universities could attach more attention to the construction of specialties and improvement of their cultural connotation, attracting students by their excellent teaching qualities and research achievements. 【點評】 首段直接點題，說明現(xiàn)象；第二段分述人們對此現(xiàn)象各持己見；第三段陳述自己的觀點，并提出建議。范文首段提出大學樓舍“豪華風”這一普遍現(xiàn)象；第二段指出贊同者認為舒適的環(huán)境能讓學生更好地投入學業(yè)中，反對者認為這不僅浪費錢，而且擾亂了正常教學活動；第三段給出自己的觀點 舊樓的拆除破壞了校園原有的歷史意義；奢華的趨勢使得大學教育商業(yè)化，給大學生帶來負面影響。 【范文】 Since graduation thesis serves as a role of evaluation, college students are required to write academic essays focusing on their major before graduation. Afraid of not getting their degree, buying graduation thesis has bee a prevailing practice. Consequently, heated discussion on the issue has been arisen. Some don39。s diverse society, where individual interests are given more emphasis, the image of Lei Feng seems to have lost its appeal to some people, and is even met with cynicism. But everybody can do the basics: show more passion, have a stronger sense of obligation and try to do good, no matter how small it is. Furthermore, governments should pay more attention to morality construction, raise people39。 【范文】 Currently, college students are unavoidably exposed to all kinds of digital products, such as digital cameras, laptops, cell phones and so on, which grow in an increasing categories and quantities. Many students continuously update their equipments to meet their overgrowing needs. Meanwhile people show great concerns about the 6 influence of those products. There is no doubt that digital products make things more convenient for college students. For instance, puters and Inter enable students to collect information with greatly improved work efficiency. What39。第一段中 unavoidably 意為“ 不可避免地 ”； are exposed to 意為“接觸”；in an increasing categories and quantities 意為“種類和數(shù)量不斷增加”。 health as their bodies could make quick adjustment. It is a kind of way by which people can make contribution to society and realize selfvalue. However, some people are still unwilling to donate blood. As a college student, I think effective measures should be taken to encourage people to join in the team of blood donation. First of all, a nationwide campaign should be launched to educate people scientific knowledge about blood donation as well as the prevention and control of diseases spread via blood. Second, activities should be carried out to raise public awareness about its benefits and safety, letting them abandon their concerns. Last but not the least, government at all levels should cooperate to create a harmonious and healthy society, and improve people’s current spiritual civilization. 【點評】 文章 第一段 從獻血的定義入手，提及獻血對人體的影響以及獻血的意義，最后一句指出問題所在 有部分人不愿加入獻血的隊 8 伍。 英語作文模板 （一）段首句 1. 關于??人們有不同的觀點。更為糟糕的是??。 Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception， it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 關于??人們的觀點各不相同，一些人認為（說）??，在他們看來，?? People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that them,_____. 7. 人類 正面臨著一個嚴重的問題??，這個問題變得越來越嚴重。很顯然??，但是為什么呢？ According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph， it can be seen that______ while. Obviously， ______，but why? （二）中間段落句 1. 相反，有一些人贊成??，他們相信??，而且，他們認為??。首先，??。一方面??，另一方面， Confronted with______， we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing， ______For another， ______ 6. 早就應該拿出行動了?？偟膩碚f，??的主要原因是由于?? Why______? The first reason is that second reason is third is all this, the main cause of ______due to ______. 8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好壞兩個方面一樣，??也有它的不利的一 面，象??。 In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of in this way can ______in the future. 3. 但是，??和??都有它們各自的優(yōu)勢（好處）。因此，迫切需要??。原因如下：第一，??； 第二，??；最后??但同樣重要的是?? In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First ______. Last but not least,______. 8. 在總體上很難說??是好還是壞，因為它在很大程度上取決于??的形勢。 16 范文： Nowadays,more and more college students are taking parttime jobs. On this phenomenon, different people hold different viewpoints. Some people think afterschool work is beneficial to the students On the other hand, it helps cultivate indepenence in young people and make them more matrure。 Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides. On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments. On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off。 Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Unhealthy Habits of College Students. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 有不健康的生活習慣，例如：晚睡、過度消費、沉溺游戲。s job in terms of money. salary counts most when I choose my future career. In my veiw our career largely depend on how and where we have been brought up. I e from a poor urban family and my parents are both laidoff workers. In order to finance my 23 tuition. they have been working hard over the past four years. As the only son is my family, I have to shoulder the burden of supporting my family. In short, salary is the first consider