【正文】 進。第一段中 serves as a role of evaluation 意為“起著評估的 4 作用”；第二段中 Consequently 意為“隨之產(chǎn)生，因此”；第三段中are of such a low quality 意為“質(zhì)量低”， fully focused on 意為“集中精力關(guān)注于”。第一段中 With a view to 意為“為了”，后面接 ；第二段中 apply themselves to academic studies 意為“全身心投入學業(yè)”；第三段中construction of specialties 意為“專業(yè)隊伍的建設(shè)”， improvement of their cultural connotation 意為“提高自身文化內(nèi)涵”。 1 大學英語四級預(yù)測作文及作文寫作模板 大學英語四級考試作文預(yù)測（ ） 恩波教育英語研究所 預(yù)測作文（一） Luxurious Buildings On Campus 1. 近年來，一些大學建起豪華樓舍來提升形象； 2. 有人贊同，有人反對； 3. 談?wù)勀愕挠^點。最后提出建議，希望大學能注重提高自身的文化內(nèi)涵，加強學科建設(shè)。t think it is necessary to write the graduation essay while the others support the current educational system. However, the main argument for scrapping essays is because most of them are of such a low quality. As this work is usually assigned in the last term, exactly when they are starting to hunt for jobs, it is no wonder that they are not fully focused on the task. Furthermore, the munication between student and tutor is far from adequate. Nevertheless, I still believe that thesises are something from which students can gain a lot if they put their heart into the task. 【點評】 文章首段通過畢業(yè)論文的用途引出社會現(xiàn)象 買賣論文成風；第二段指出不同的人對此持有不同意見；第三段結(jié)合自身觀點，分析現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因：畢業(yè)論文一般是最后一學期完成，而學生忙于找工作導致論文質(zhì)量低，另外學生和導師的溝通不夠，最后給出自己的觀點 畢業(yè)論文對于學生而言很重要，如果用心去做，學生可以從中學到很多。s willingness to help others, let them realize that altruism is always necessary for a harmonious society and provide fuel to the flame so it can burn more 5 brightly. 【點評】 文章第一段通過介紹雷鋒，說明雷鋒精神，引出社會現(xiàn)象：有些人變得自私，不愿幫助那些需 要幫助的人；第二段指出過分強調(diào)個人利益使得雷鋒形象失去原有魅力，為弘揚雷鋒精神，個人應(yīng)該有強烈的責任感，勿以善小而不為，政府應(yīng)該加強道德建設(shè)，提高人們助人為樂的意識。s more, digital items widen students39。第二段中 There is no doubt that… 意為“?? 毫無疑問”； For instance表示列舉； cultivate a generation more isolated from the real life 意為“培養(yǎng)出與現(xiàn)實生活脫節(jié)的一代人”。第二段從自己作為大學生的角度，提出自己的意見：首先需要開展運動，向人們傳授獻血方面的科學知識以及血液疾病預(yù)防知識；其次，開展提高公共意識的活動；最后各級政府部門應(yīng)該創(chuàng)建和諧健康的社會。一些人認為?? There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. 2. 俗話說（常言道）??，它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷，但是，即使在今天，它在許多場合仍然適用。 Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, 9 ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______. 4. 現(xiàn)在，??很普遍，許多人喜歡??，因為??，另外（而且）??。 Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is being more and more serious. 8. ??已成為人的關(guān)注的熱門話題，特別是在年青人當中，將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。 On the contrary， there are some people in favor of the same time，they say____. 2. 但是，我認為這不是解決??的好方法，比如??。而且??，最重要的是?? ______is necessary and important to our countrys de evelopment and construction. First， s more, important of all,______. 4. 有幾個可供我們采納的方法。比如說??，另外??。 However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______. 9. 盡管如此，我相信??更有利。例如，??，而??。如果每個人都愿為社會貢獻自已的一份力量，這個社會將要變得越來越好。然而，就我個人而言，我發(fā)現(xiàn)??。on the other hand, students who have parttime jobs can relieve, to some extent,the economic burdens of their parents. But afterschool work has brought a lot of problems. For example, parttime jobs often distract students39。 On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn’t afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents。 寫作思路依然是上課反復強調(diào)的功能段落的寫作思路：首段為負面現(xiàn)象描述 (即提出問題 )，二段為問題分析 (危害 )，尾段為建議措施。 The Craze of Pursuing Graduate Studies 【精彩范文】 The Craze of Pursuing Graduate Studies Each year, millions of Chinese college students sit for qualifying examinations for graduate studies, primarily in Master’ s programs. Students prepare for those examinations either through years of arduous selfeducation or by spending large sums of money attending local training schools. The publishing of examinationsrelated study materials and the training programs offered, both online and offline, have bined to form a sizable industry. An alarming fact about this craze is that most students pursue graduate studies not out of their voluntary will. Faced with the harsh reality in the employment market, which is 27 forever looking for graduates with higher degrees, many college graduates find going to graduate schools is a good way to avoid unemployment and to enhance one’ s petitiveness in future job hunting. However, without that voluntary initiative, most students who do enter graduate schools are not motivated. For them, the only thing that ultimately counts is the degree or the diploma which they expect could give them an upper hand against other job hunters. As to the actual substance of their graduate studies, it’ s not a big deal for them, as long as it leads to that degree or diploma. It is really pathetic to see that students undertake graduate studies with an ulterior motive— not for the sake of loving what they study, but for the sake of merely landing a job, which in many cases might be unrelated to what they have studied. The chill truth is that students soon find their anticipations are a mere dream. As so many undergraduates proceed onto graduate studies, the employment situation remains as severe as ever. Instead of bringing about apparent petitive edges, two or three years of additional academic training is simply a waste of time and energy. They need to 28 reflect on this craze and would have been better off distinguishing themselves with outstanding knowledge and skills when they were undergraduates. 【參考譯文】 考 研 熱 每年，數(shù)以百萬計的中國大學生參加研究生入學資格考試，主要是攻讀碩士學位課程。面對著就業(yè)市場上嚴峻的現(xiàn)實，看著雇主們永遠將目光投向那些學歷更高的畢業(yè)生，許多大學生發(fā)現(xiàn)，進入研究生院去攻讀碩士學位不失為一個良策，一方面避免了失業(yè)，另一方面可以提升未來求職過程中的競爭力。至于他們研究生課程實際 學習什么內(nèi)容，于他們而言并非關(guān)鍵所在，只要所學的東西能帶來一紙學位或文憑即可。二至三年額外的學術(shù)訓練沒能給學生帶來顯著的競爭優(yōu)勢，而是令他們白白地浪費了時光與精力，大學生們有必要對此熱潮展開