福州市20xx—20xx學年末高三質(zhì)量檢查書面表達-wenkub
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【正文】 f we have confidence in ourselves. If necessary, we can turn to psychological consultants. () ? Facing the above problems, we ought to find some effective measures to cope with them. First of all, we students must learn to relax ourselves through doing some sports, listening to music and so on. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, (只工作，不玩耍，聰明小伙也變傻。 ? 最后用倒裝句結(jié)束短文，比較“ 給力 ”。 ? What should we do to solve these problems? In my opinion, firstly we should take more exercise and learn to relax ourselves. Secondly, we are supposed to talk to our friends about our problems and seek advice from psychological consultants. Meanwhile, schools should set up special offices to help students solve their mental problems. Parents should also care more about the mental health of their children. Only by doing so can we solve these problems. ( 148 words ) ? 如何解決焦慮的問題應是闡述的重點。 ? The causes of the mental problems above may include too much school work, high expectations from the teachers and the parents and lack of physical exercise and munication. ? 說明焦慮的起因，用三個并列的 名詞短語， 表達簡練。 3. 詞數(shù) 120 左右 。 4）特別要注意良好書寫習慣的養(yǎng)成。 書面表達 隨著高考的臨近 ， 越來越多的學生開始焦慮 ， 他們的健康問題引起越來越多人的關(guān)注。 參考詞匯 :psychological 心理 ( 上 ) 的 consultant 提供咨詢的專家 （ 另注 ：少于 100詞，扣 2分。 ? 簡單的一個 above起到了承上的作用。范文根據(jù)所給的提示，針對第二段的 causes，從 students， schools， parents三方面提出了問題的解決之道。 問題與錯誤 1. 審題問題： 此點重點在于寫 phenomena，即 焦慮 現(xiàn)象（ 焦慮 的表現(xiàn) 形式 ），不能只寫 焦慮 什么 。 ) ” as old saying goes. () 學生方面： ? We students should learn to be confident when facing any challenges. We can also turn to psychological consultants for help. () ? We students can municate with psychological consultants to seek for some solutions to our problems. We shouldn’t always think exams are what life is all about（人生不只是考試） . （） ? We students should adjust our attitude
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