【正文】 第一篇：2015年高考英語滿分作文賞析2015年高考英語滿分作文賞析。表達地道【北京卷高考英語】【試題回放】第一節(jié)情景作文(20分)美國中學生jeff將要來你所在的紅星中學學習中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設你是李華，請給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。注意：。Dear Jeff，I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle ’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a ’ll also have your own school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by noon we’ll eat at the school dining ’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over in our school usually finish at 4 in the can then join other students in playing ball games or ’ll be a lot of you have any questions or requests, please let me ’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant wishes，Li Hua[名師點評]這篇文章的特點還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據(jù)圖畫將文章的要點概括完整，內(nèi)容充實而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感。第二，本文沒有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新?！景不站砀呖加⒄Z】【試題回放】假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：l 表示贊成。l 提出你喜歡的欄目。l 簡要說明理由。注意：。，以使行文連貫。：欄目—columnDear ，I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of , “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each will offer a wonderful from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy , I can’t list really can’t wait to read that magazine!Yours faithfully，Li Hua【名師點評】這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數(shù)普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can39。t wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服?！颈本┚砀呖加⒄Z】【試題回放】情景作文假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為響應綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the arrival, we began to work were digging were carrying and planting young were getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the leaving we took some photos to record our green the lines of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點評】本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達。【北京卷高考英語】【試題回放】開放作文請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating man in the picture is trying to copy he is doing it the hard using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點評】本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達。考生重點要看出這個人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確?！救珖砀呖加⒄Z】【試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關網(wǎng)站(website)關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：自我介紹。祝賀蘇琳生日。感謝工作人員。索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：詞數(shù)100左右?？梢赃m當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。開頭語已為你寫好。例文：Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in ’ve been a panda lover since I was a three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be ’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in truly，Li Hua【名師點評】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點如下：。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運用合理，結(jié)合了簡單句和復合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。積累卡片英漢互譯 ，快樂的 birth to ，生育好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the ，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活?！靖呖加⒄Z全國卷II】【試題回放】一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：：距白山入口處500米。：單人間(共20間)，100元/天。雙人間(共15間)，150元/天。熱水淋浴。：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡)。：全天免費開放。注意：，開頭語已為你寫好。，以使行文連貫。Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per also provides hot water bath can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the swimming pool is open for free the whole these services can bring great convenience to you and are very e to enjoy yourself!Wele to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點評】本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確?？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery ，并且非常的愉快。評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。【重慶卷高考英語】【試題回放】據(jù)報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，