【正文】 2010年沖刺班雅思A類寫作講義主講：劉巍巍第一講 雅思高分寫作思路總覽雅思寫作高分：7分或7分以上第一節(jié)的內(nèi)容：1． 雅思寫作的整體介紹2． 高分寫作的要求3． 解決問題的方案4． 課程的總覽一． 雅思寫作的整體介紹 General Introduction聽力、閱讀考試之后60分鐘 Task 1 and Task 2A類和G類的區(qū)別：task 2 議論文task 1 A：圖表作文 G：書信評(píng)分：以Task 2 為主二：高分寫作的要求評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(詞匯與句子結(jié)構(gòu))Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(論證，論點(diǎn)和論據(jù))Communicative Quality(交流質(zhì)量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(詞匯與句子結(jié)構(gòu))1. 避免使用過于低級(jí)的單詞The problem bees worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was pounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to petition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument.The claim that sports lead to petition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:farreaching（深遠(yuǎn)的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（災(zāi)難的）, damaging（破壞性的）, devastating（破壞性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（災(zāi)難的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲慘的）, severe（嚴(yán)重的）, 2. 避免過分重復(fù)同一樣的單詞Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3. 盡可能展示多變的句型定語從句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds. 倒裝句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media. Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media. 伴隨狀語：It is mon now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is mon for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.設(shè)問句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(論證，論點(diǎn)和論據(jù))Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think? 有人認(rèn)為，為了提高教育質(zhì)量，我們應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)高中生對(duì)自己的老師進(jìn)行評(píng)估；別的人卻認(rèn)為這種評(píng)估是不尊重教師、違反學(xué)校紀(jì)律的行為。請給出你的看法？學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)老師的理由：1. 通過評(píng)估，老師可以知道學(xué)生究竟想些什么、需要什么If students are not allowed to evaluate or criticize the teachers, it is hard for the teachers to find out what the students think or what they need.2. 評(píng)價(jià)和批評(píng)本身也是一種有效的交流方式Evaluation and criticism are themselves effective forms of munication3. 聽取學(xué)生的真實(shí)意見和想法，教師自己也能夠受益匪淺Teachers will benefit a lot when their minds are open to the ideas and honest opinions of the youngsters.高分作文兩個(gè)注意事項(xiàng)：1． 論據(jù)盡可能新穎：論據(jù)新穎，文字才更有可能新穎2． 新穎應(yīng)該讓位于準(zhǔn)確性：確保文字沒有錯(cuò)誤Communicative Quality(交流質(zhì)量)1． 高分作文，在于文字和論據(jù)精彩，不在于結(jié)構(gòu)另類2． 雅思作文類型固定，寫作模式也固定，高分作文亦然三：解決問題的方案1 Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(詞匯與句子結(jié)構(gòu))224。總結(jié)大量經(jīng)典搭配，交替使用2Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(論證，論點(diǎn)和論據(jù))224。范文講解附帶論據(jù)整理3Communicative Quality(交流質(zhì)量)224。給出固定寫作思路，不求變革四：課程總覽八節(jié)課程第一節(jié)：整體介紹第二至第七節(jié)：各類議論文的高分寫作思路第八節(jié)：A類：圖表作文高分寫作思路G類：書信類作文高分寫作思路第二節(jié) 觀點(diǎn)類雅思作文高分寫作思路范例：Nowadays puters are widely used in education. As a result, some people think teachers no longer play an important role in classrooms. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today’s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What’s your opinion?University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?Some people think that it is the responsibility of the government to ensure that people in the country have healthy lifestyles. Other people believe that individuals should be free to decide their own lifestyles. Please give your opinion.標(biāo)志性文字：Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree or disagree?What’s your opinion?Please give your own opinion. 重點(diǎn)在于：就題目討論的問題，給出自己的觀點(diǎn)結(jié)構(gòu)構(gòu)思：1. 傳統(tǒng)的寫作思路: 第一段亮出觀點(diǎn)，然后分段給出不同的論據(jù)，最后一段收尾，總結(jié)全文，同時(shí)再次重申自己的觀點(diǎn)2. 高分作文，在于文字（詞匯、句型、觀點(diǎn)）方面制造亮點(diǎn)，不在于在結(jié)構(gòu)方面鋌而走險(xiǎn)嘗試新的方式范文講解1：Nowadays people can use puters to talk, learn and municate without leaving home. There is a danger that it will cause more isolation and a lack of munication among people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?寫作思路：：電腦不會(huì)妨礙人和人之間的交流小提示：科技類的文章，盡量選擇正觀點(diǎn)，講述科技為人類做出的貢獻(xiàn)為佳2. 論據(jù):(1). 不能狹隘地理解交流和隔閡，在電腦屏幕前花很多的時(shí)間不等于缺乏與世隔絕， Communication and isolation must not be defined in a narrow sense. Alienation of people is not caused by how little they talk or meet each other but by lack of interest in our fellow creatures or the world at large. 隔絕、疏遠(yuǎn)： isolation alienation (2). 計(jì)算機(jī)讓大家有了共同的興趣，促進(jìn)了人們之間的共鳴mon 共同的Computers help to prevent isolation by bringing every possible field of interest onto the screen. You can broaden your interests and enrich your life by accessing whatever and whoever you are interested in. (3). 不同的時(shí)代有不同的交流方式，電腦就是當(dāng)今時(shí)代的交流工具之一Our mode of munication is forever changing and puters represent the latest way of munication. 遠(yuǎn)古時(shí)代： primitive primeval times shouts and gestures 吶喊和手勢后來： 文字和語言 spoken and written language現(xiàn)代： we prefe